Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat natural but includes an unclear question at the end which disrupts the flow. Try to keep your response focused and avoid adding unrelated questions. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friends. We often talk about our daily lives, routines, hobbies, and dreams. Additionally, I like meeting new people and discussing future plans, such as upcoming vacations.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Avoid redundancy and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, try to be more specific about your experiences to enrich your response.

例: Usually, I chat with my friends about my daily routines, vacations, and experiences in my new life. For example, with my best friends, I often share my experiences working as a registered nurse, which is both challenging and rewarding.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains incomplete sentences and filler words. Try to organize your thoughts clearly, avoid hesitations, and complete your sentences. Use linking words to compare your preferences effectively.

例: I enjoy chatting with a group of friends occasionally, especially during meetings where we share daily tasks and improve our work environment. However, I also appreciate one-on-one conversations with my best friend because they are more personal and meaningful.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be improved by using more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence. Also, avoid repeating phrases and try to be more concise.

例: Nowadays, I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to relax and share my experiences more effectively. Moreover, seeing facial expressions helps me connect better, providing a refreshing break from my busy daily routine.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some hesitations and awkward phrasing. Try to avoid filler words and use linking words to explain your ideas clearly. Also, use more precise vocabulary to express your thoughts.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on a topic. However, I believe this is positive because it allows me to understand other perspectives and broaden my own views.

× But when I talked about my bestest, my best friends, I usually talk about my new experience as a registered nurse.

✓ But when I talk about my best friends, I usually talk about my new experience as a registered nurse.

The word 'bestest' is a nonstandard and incorrect superlative form of 'best'. The correct term is 'best'. Also, the tense inconsistency between 'talked' and 'usually talk' should be corrected to maintain present tense consistency.

× I like Cherry occasionally with a group of friends, especially in the meeting, uh, groups where we can share our daily tasks, daily routine and we can improve our work environment.

✓ I like chatting occasionally with a group of friends, especially in meeting groups where we can share our daily tasks, daily routines and improve our work environment.

The phrase 'I like Cherry occasionally' is unclear and likely a mispronunciation or misuse. It should be 'I like chatting occasionally'. Also, 'in the meeting, uh, groups' is awkward; 'in meeting groups' is clearer. 'Daily routine' should be plural 'daily routines' to match 'daily tasks'.

× But also I like one-on-one shot with my best friend where.

✓ But I also like one-on-one chats with my best friend.

The phrase 'one-on-one shot' is incorrect; the intended phrase is likely 'one-on-one chat'. The sentence is incomplete and should be completed for clarity.

× Nowadays I like face to face communication especially because we are so busy and face to face, giving me more relaxing time where I can share my experiences and where I can see the face and expression and I can have some time off of my daily routine.

✓ Nowadays, I like face-to-face communication especially because we are so busy, and face-to-face communication gives me more relaxing time where I can share my experiences, see facial expressions, and have some time off my daily routine.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. The sentence structure is awkward and needs rephrasing for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'See the face and expression' should be 'see facial expressions'. 'Have some time off of my daily routine' should be 'have some time off my daily routine'.

× Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends, especially when we have a different, uh, argumentation about a topic.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I argue with friends, especially when we have different arguments about a topic.

The word 'argumentation' is a formal noun referring to the process of arguing, which is not appropriate here. The correct plural noun is 'arguments' to indicate differing points of view.

× And sometimes I feel this is very good and positive thought because I can see other view and other person perspective.

✓ And sometimes I feel this is a very good and positive thought because I can see other views and other people's perspectives.

The phrase 'other view' should be plural 'other views' to indicate multiple perspectives. 'Other person perspective' is incorrect; it should be 'other people's perspectives' to correctly use the possessive form and plural noun.