Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

× Yes, I really enjoy was chatting with my friends because it's more convenient and certain methods to stay in touch with each other when we are in a busy mode also.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it's a more convenient and certain method to stay in touch with each other when we are busy.

The phrase 'enjoy was chatting' is incorrect because 'enjoy' should be followed by the gerund form of the verb, not the past tense. Also, 'certain methods' should be singular 'method' to agree with 'more convenient'. The phrase 'in a busy mode also' is awkward; 'when we are busy' is clearer.

× I usually chat with my friends is all about the news that important, important ideas that we can start up a new company and where I go and where I what I did eventually it's always ending ends in about happiness and service and about about the.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about important news, ideas for starting a new company, where I go, and what I did. Eventually, our conversations always end with happiness and service.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Chat with my friends is all about' is incorrect; it should be 'chat with my friends about'. Repetition and unclear phrases were corrected for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I actually enjoyed in the both situations, a group and a of 1 friend.

✓ I actually enjoy both situations, a group and one friend.

The phrase 'enjoyed in the both situations' is incorrect; 'enjoy' does not require 'in' and should be in present tense to match the context. 'a of 1 friend' is incorrect; it should be 'one friend'.

× Even when it comes to a joke, it will live with conversations with within hours.

✓ Even when it comes to a joke, it will live on in conversations for hours.

The phrase 'live with conversations with within hours' is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Live on in conversations for hours' is the correct expression.

× Uh, past lives or if ourselves do in a future life, uh, when it comes to, uh, persons we actually spend, we actually talked about spending time with each other. We are.

✓ We talk about past lives or what we might do in a future life. When it comes to people, we actually spend time together and talk about it.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It lacks proper verb forms and sentence structure. The correction provides clear, complete sentences with proper tense and subject-verb agreement.

× I mean, it's all about the situations that in the period, uh, if, uh, when it comes to face to face, it's all about the new, new and important info, information between us and, and they need to know about in person or if it comes to via social media, it's all about the times and, uh, what I'm trying to tell.

✓ I mean, it depends on the situation. When it comes to face-to-face communication, it's about sharing new and important information in person. If it is via social media, it's about timing and what I'm trying to say.

The original sentence misuses prepositions and is confusing. 'Situations that in the period' is incorrect; 'depends on the situation' is better. 'Need to know about in person' is awkward; 'sharing... in person' is clearer. 'If it comes to via social media' is incorrect; 'if it is via social media' is correct.

× No, because I argue with my friends because it's all about their dish decision with with minds.

✓ No, I don't argue with my friends because it's all about their different decisions and opinions.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'dish decision with with minds' which is unclear. 'Different decisions and opinions' is the correct phrase. Also, 'No, because I argue' is contradictory; corrected to 'No, I don't argue'.

× It's not in correlations when it's Despite that, uh, we come, we come in common.

✓ Our opinions are not always aligned. Despite that, we find common ground.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Not in correlations' is incorrect; 'opinions are not always aligned' is clearer. 'We come in common' is incorrect; 'we find common ground' is the correct expression.

× We ended up the each other arguments and become, uh, become more useful.

✓ We end up resolving each other's arguments and become more understanding.

The phrase 'ended up the each other arguments' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'end up resolving each other's arguments'. 'Become more useful' is unclear; 'become more understanding' fits better in context.