Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但句子结构稍显复杂且有语法错误，如“funny things happened recently”应为“funny things that happened recently”，且“which help us to update our personal lives”表达不够准确。建议简化句子结构，注意语法，避免冗长。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we often share funny things that happened recently. This helps us stay updated about each other's lives. Sometimes, I also share my excitement and achievements with my close friends.

提案: 回答中时态不一致，如“talked”应为“talk”。句子衔接不够流畅，“so which really makes our friendship stronger”表达不自然。建议注意时态一致，使用恰当的连接词，使表达更连贯。

例: We usually talk about everything in our daily lives, such as events at work. Sometimes, we share funny videos we find on social media. These conversations help us stay connected and make our friendship stronger.

提案: 回答结构清晰，内容具体，表达自然。但“with delicious meals”可改为“that serves delicious meals”更准确。建议注意细节表达，使语言更地道。

例: It depends on the occasion. For example, if I want to recommend a very good restaurant that serves delicious meals, I would share it with a group of people. However, if I want to discuss personal or deep topics, I prefer to talk with a close friend.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构不够紧凑，存在语法错误，如“in a further place”应为“in a distant place”。建议简化句子，注意语法和词汇搭配。

例: I prefer to communicate via social media because it is more convenient. You can start a conversation anytime and anywhere. Also, it helps me stay in touch with my parents who live far away.

提案: 回答内容完整，表达了观点和原因。但“Even she's my close friend”应为“Even though she is my close friend”，且句子衔接可更自然。建议注意连词使用和句子流畅性。

例: Yes, absolutely. Even though she is my close friend, we don't always agree, for example, on reviews of the latest movie or other opinions. However, we always make up and laugh together because our friendship is the most important.

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we often talk about the funny things happened recently and which help us to update our personal lives.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we often talk about the funny things that happened recently and which help us to update our personal lives.

这里缺少关系代词"that"，用来引导定语从句修饰"things"。在英语中，定语从句中缺少关系代词会导致句子不完整。建议在"things"和"happened"之间加上"that"。

× Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we often talk about the funny things happened recently and which help us to update our personal lives.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we often talk about the funny things that happened recently and that help us to update our personal lives.

"which"在这里指代前面的复数名词"things"，应使用关系代词"that"更合适，且需要明确指代。建议将"which"改为"that"。

× And sometimes I just want to share my excitement and achievement to my close friends.

✓ And sometimes I just want to share my excitement and achievement with my close friends.

动词"share"后应接介词"with"表示分享的对象，而不是"to"。这是介词使用错误。建议将"to"改为"with"。

× We usually talked about everything in our daily lives, such as what happened at work, and sometimes we just share funny videos we browse on social media.

✓ We usually talk about everything in our daily lives, such as what happened at work, and sometimes we just share funny videos we browse on social media.

句子中描述的是习惯性动作，应该使用一般现在时，"talked"是过去式，时态错误。建议将"talked"改为"talk"。

× So these conversations help us stay connected and updated so which really makes our friendship stronger.

✓ So these conversations help us stay connected and updated, which really makes our friendship stronger.

"which"引导非限制性定语从句时，前面应有逗号，且不能用"so which"。这里"so"多余，应去掉。建议删除"so"并在前面加逗号。

× I prefer to communicate via social media because it's more convenient, like you can start this conversation at any place anytime and when I want to stay in touch with my parents who actually live in a further place, it will be easy.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because it's more convenient, like you can start this conversation at any place anytime, and when I want to stay in touch with my parents who actually live in a farther place, it will be easy.

"further"通常用于抽象距离，"farther"用于具体物理距离。这里指具体距离，应该用"farther"。建议将"further"改为"farther"。

× Yes, absolutely. Even she's my close friend.

✓ Yes, absolutely. Even though she's my close friend.

"Even"后面应接完整的从句，缺少连词"though"导致句子不完整。建议将"Even"改为"Even though"。

× But we can't agree with each other all the time, such as the reviews on the latest movie or our different opinions.

✓ But we can't agree on everything all the time, such as the reviews on the latest movie or our different opinions.

"agree"后面搭配介词应为"agree on"表示对某事达成一致，而不是"agree with each other"。建议将"agree with each other"改为"agree on everything"。

× But we end up making up and laughing together because the friendship is the most important.

✓ But we end up making up and laughing together because friendship is the most important.

"friendship"作为抽象名词，前面不需要定冠词"the"。使用"the friendship"不符合习惯用法。建议去掉"the"。