Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免句子不完整，如“Makes me feel warm and accepted”应改为完整句子。此外，内容可以更具体，举例时应说明具体分享了哪些事情。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it makes me feel warm and accepted. For example, I often share my recent worries about school exams or happy moments like family gatherings.

提案: 回答不连贯且有语法错误，句子不完整。应直接回答问题并提供具体内容，避免模糊表达。

例: I usually chat with my best friend about our studies, the differences between our schools, and the relationships we have with people around us.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时避免重复表达“need to”。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it is easier to understand their emotions. In contrast, chatting with a group requires paying attention to everyone's feelings, which can be challenging.

提案: 回答内容明确，但句子结构稍显重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子并使用连接词。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read subtle emotions through micro-expressions, which is not possible when using social media.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。应完整表达观点，并提供具体理由或例子。

例: No, I usually don't argue with my friends because we share similar opinions on many topics. I believe maintaining harmony is very important in friendship.

× Makes me feel warm and accepted.

✓ It makes me feel warm and accepted.

句子缺少主语，导致结构不完整。应加上主语“it”使句子完整。

× I am my best friend.

✓ He is my best friend.

句子主语和语境不符，学生想表达“他是我最好的朋友”，应使用第三人称代词“he”。

× We are in different schools now so we often chat about.

✓ We are in different schools now, so we often chat.

句子缺少宾语，导致表达不完整。去掉“about”使句子完整。

× Or study individually or our relationship between the people around us.

✓ We chat about studying individually or our relationships with the people around us.

句子缺少主语和谓语，且表达不完整。补充主语和谓语，使句子完整且通顺。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because when you are in a face to face communication you can read a lot of emotions from the person's micro expression and that's not you can get it from social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when you are in face-to-face communication, you can read a lot of emotions from the person's micro expressions, and that's something you cannot get from social media.

“face to face”应连字符连接为“face-to-face”；“that's not you can get it”表达错误，应改为“that's something you cannot get”；“micro expression”应为复数“micro expressions”。

× First of all, friends are someone who have the same opinion with me in many things and I think harmony is the most important thing in friendship for me and I will.

✓ First of all, friends are people who have the same opinions as me on many things, and I think harmony is the most important thing in friendship for me.

“someone”应改为复数“people”；“have the same opinion with me”应改为“have the same opinions as me”；句子末尾“and I will”不完整，应删除。