Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中时态使用不准确，且表达不够自然。建议使用现在时态，并简洁表达原因，避免多余词汇。

例: Yes, I like chatting with friends because it helps me relax after a stressful day at school.

提案: 句子结构不完整，表达不流畅。建议简化句子，明确表达聊天内容和原因，使用连接词使句子连贯。

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily and school life because sharing these experiences helps us understand each other better.

提案: 语法错误（helps应为help），表达较清晰但可以更自然。建议注意主谓一致，丰富表达。

例: I prefer talking with only one friend because it allows us to get to know each other better.

提案: 词汇使用错误（society media应为social media），句子结构不够自然。建议使用正确词汇，简洁表达理由。

例: I prefer to communicate via social media because I can talk to my friends anytime, which is very convenient.

提案: 表达不清晰且有语法错误。建议明确描述争吵的原因和反应，避免矛盾表达。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when they make jokes at my expense, and it makes me feel upset.

× Yes I did. Umm, I think chatting with friends can help me relax it because after class I often feel unhappy.

✓ Yes, I do. Umm, I think chatting with friends can help me relax because after class I often feel unhappy.

这里的回答是对现在的喜好提问，应该用一般现在时"do"，而不是过去时"did"。另外，"relax it"中的"it"多余，应去掉。

× I usually chat with my friends about our daily life and school life because it I think talk about it, it's necessary for me.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about our daily life and school life because I think talking about it is necessary for me.

原句中"it I think talk about it"结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，且"talk"应改为动名词"talking"。调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I prefer to talk with only one friend. I think it can helps us to know about each other better.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend. I think it can help us to know each other better.

"helps"应为原形"help"，因为前面有情态动词"can"，情态动词后动词用原形。

× I prefer to communicate with society media because in any time I can talk with my friend and I think it is convenient for me.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because I can talk with my friend anytime and I think it is convenient for me.

"society media"应为"social media"，"in any time"应改为"anytime"，更符合英语习惯。

× Yes I do, when my friends make a big joke for me and laughter at me, I will be angry and agree with him.

✓ Yes, I do. When my friends make a big joke about me and laugh at me, I get angry and disagree with them.

"make a big joke for me"应为"make a big joke about me"，"laughter"是名词，应改为动词"laugh"，"agree with him"与上下文不符，应为"disagree with them"。句子结构需调整使其通顺。