Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答が不自然で、言葉の詰まりや文法の誤りが多いです。話す内容を簡潔にし、文法的に正しい文章を心がけてください。また、話題を明確にし、冗長な表現を避けることが重要です。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my best friends. We often talk about interesting TV programs, new coffee shops, and books we have read recently.

提案: 内容が不明瞭で、文法や語彙の誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、具体的な話題を明確に述べるようにしましょう。接続詞を使って文をつなげると自然になります。

例: Usually, my friends and I talk about coffee because we all love trying new types. We often share information about new coffee shops we discover.

提案: 回答が混乱していて意味が伝わりにくいです。質問に対して明確に答え、理由を述べる際は論理的に話を展開してください。

例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because I feel more comfortable and can have deeper conversations than in a group.

提案: 言いたいことは伝わりますが、言葉の詰まりや繰り返しが多いです。理由を明確に述べ、文を簡潔にまとめる練習をしましょう。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because my friends and I are often busy with work, so it's easier to stay in touch online.

提案: 回答が非常に不明瞭で、意味が伝わりません。質問に対して簡潔で明確な答えを用意し、具体的な例を加えると良いでしょう。

例: No, I rarely argue with my friends. We usually try to understand each other's opinions and avoid conflicts.

× we often talking about it to, uh, about interesting, uh, to be programs or, or new, uh, new coffees and books.

✓ we often talk about interesting TV programs or new coffees and books.

The verb 'talking' is incorrectly used here without an auxiliary verb. The correct form is the base verb 'talk' after 'we often'. Also, 'to be programs' is unclear and likely meant to be 'TV programs'. The phrase 'about it to' is redundant and incorrect.

× Uh, it depends on part I part, uh, I and uh, my best friends are perceived as I love coffee for being sold, uh, most of the time we uh, share our new coffees.

✓ It depends on the part. My best friends and I love coffee, so most of the time we share our new coffees.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The phrase 'are perceived as I love coffee for being sold' is incorrect and confusing. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× Well, umm, I, I love uh, chatting with my friends umm uh, Portugal always uh, is my only one friend and uh, lot of friends, but uh, but uh, I feel comfortable when I talk with my best friends, uh, she it.

✓ Well, I love chatting with my friends. Umm, Portugal is my only one friend, and I have a lot of friends, but I feel comfortable when I talk with my best friend.

The pronouns and sentence structure are confusing. 'She it' is incorrect and unclear. The correction uses proper pronouns and clearer sentence structure.

× Well, I, uh, personally, I enjoy umm, chatting with my best friends on, on uh, social media because uh, I umm, umm, uh, work, work, uh, were busy and do uh, working, busy working, sorry.

✓ Well, I personally enjoy chatting with my best friends on social media because we are busy with work.

The original sentence has redundant and incorrect prepositions and phrases like 'on, on uh' and 'do uh, working'. The correction simplifies and corrects preposition use and verb forms.

× Nor, umm, most terrible time I and do my best friend, uh, he tried also, umm, and uh, we can't uh, meet the first two first or offense or we really, uh, argue.

✓ No, most of the time my best friend and I try to avoid arguments, but sometimes we can't meet without offending each other and we really argue.

The modal verb 'can't' is used incorrectly in the original sentence. The correction clarifies the use of modal verbs and improves sentence clarity.