Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时时态不统一，且部分句子表达不够自然流畅。建议注意时态一致性，避免使用不自然的表达，如“it made us relax”应为“it helps us relax”。同时，回答可以更简洁，避免冗余。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us catch up and share stories. It also helps me relax, and when I have emotional problems, I find it useful to talk with them.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且不够连贯。建议注意句子结构完整，避免语法错误，如“I'm afraid that discussing politics and opinions on some things with my friends because...”缺少谓语。可以使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I often chat with my friends about food, tourism, and gossip. However, I avoid discussing politics or sensitive opinions because it might create distance and harm our friendship.

提案: 回答中表达不够简洁，部分句子结构复杂且不自然。建议简化句子，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意主谓一致。

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because group conversations can be noisy and distracting. Talking one-on-one feels more comfortable and relaxed.

提案: 回答较为自然，但“true doubts”表达不够准确，建议使用更合适的词汇如“true feelings”或“true thoughts”。同时可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it's easier to express our true feelings. On social media, misunderstandings can happen more easily.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“after query”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和句子结构，表达观点时更清晰。

例: Sometimes we have different opinions, so we argue. However, I respect my friends' views and don't try to change them because everyone has their own ideas.

× It made us relax.

✓ It makes us relax.

这里描述的是一种习惯性动作或事实，应该使用一般现在时，而不是过去时。

× try to discuss with your friends.

✓ try to discuss with your friends.

此句中“discuss”后面不需要介词“with”，直接加宾语即可，正确表达应为“discuss your problems with your friends”。

× discussing politics and opinions on some things with my friends

✓ discussing politics and opinions about some things with my friends

“opinions on”通常用来表达对某事的看法，但这里更合适用“opinions about”来表达对某些事情的意见。

× but I'm afraid that discussing politics and opinions on some things with my friends because it will cause us a distance and destroy our friendship.

✓ but I'm afraid that discussing politics and opinions about some things with my friends will cause distance between us and destroy our friendship.

原句结构不完整，缺少主句谓语，导致句子不通顺。需要调整句子结构，使其完整表达意思。

× I prefer to chat with friends alone because noisy sounds of chatting with a group of people will affect your language organization and your speech needs to pay attention to other people's feelings, which makes us feel uneasy.

✓ I prefer to chat with a friend alone because the noisy sounds of chatting with a group of people will affect your language organization and your speech needs to pay attention to other people's feelings, which makes us feel uneasy.

“friends alone”表达不清，应为“a friend alone”表示单独和一个朋友聊天。

× your language organization and your speech needs to pay attention to other people's feelings, which makes us feel uneasy.

✓ your language organization and your speech need to pay attention to other people's feelings, which makes us feel uneasy.

主语是复数（language organization and speech），谓语动词应使用复数形式“need”。

× Chatting along with friends will be more pleasant and relaxed.

✓ Chatting alone with friends will be more pleasant and relaxed.

“along with”用法错误，应为“alone with”表示单独和朋友聊天。

× I prefer to talk to my friends face to face because it is difficult for us to express our true doubts on social media.

✓ I prefer to talk to my friends face to face because it is difficult for us to express our true thoughts on social media.

“doubts”用法不当，表达“真实想法”应使用“thoughts”更合适。

× Chatting face to face makes it easier for us to express our feelings.

✓ Chatting face-to-face makes it easier for us to express our feelings.

“face to face”作为形容词短语修饰动名词时，应使用连字符“face-to-face”。

× Sometimes we have different views on the same thing, so quarrels happen, but after query I won't change my views on my friends because everyone has their own ideas.

✓ Sometimes we have different views on the same thing, so quarrels happen, but after inquiry I won't change my views about my friends because everyone has their own ideas.

“query”用词不当，应使用“inquiry”表示“询问、探讨”；另外“views on my friends”应为“views about my friends”。