Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且内容重复且不连贯。建议简化句子结构，避免口头语，明确表达观点，并使用连接词使回答更流畅。

例: I don't usually like chatting with friends because I am an introverted person. However, if I feel anxious or upset, I might talk to a close friend to feel better.

提案: 回答内容混乱且难以理解，缺乏具体细节和连贯性。建议直接回答问题，提供具体话题，并使用简单明了的句子表达。

例: Usually, I chat with my friends about daily life, school, and sometimes we gossip about celebrities.

提案: 回答较为直接，但存在重复和语法问题。建议避免重复表达，补充原因并使用连接词使回答更完整。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I am introverted and find it easier to have deep conversations with a single person rather than a group.

提案: 回答表达有些重复且不够流畅。建议减少重复，使用更自然的表达，并补充更多细节说明原因。

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is convenient. For example, I can chat with my friends on my phone even when we are in different places, like me at home and them at school.

提案: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并说明原因，避免重复和模糊表达。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because I try to avoid conflicts. I believe it's important to maintain good relationships.

× But if I met Johnson really maybe annoying or like anxiety, I will talk to my friends.

✓ But if I meet Johnson and he is really annoying or anxious, I will talk to my friends.

这里“met”使用了过去式，但句子表达的是一种假设或一般情况，应使用一般现在时“meet”。另外，“anxiety”是名词，形容人时应使用形容词“anxious”。

× Now just like what I just said, I would have changed my prayers about things which doesn't switch really made me or made her anxiety or interest or something.

✓ Now just like what I just said, I would have changed my phrases about things which don't really make me or her anxious or interested or something.

“prayers”应为“phrases”，意思为“表达”；“doesn't”应改为“don't”，因为主语是复数“things”；“made”应改为“make”，保持时态一致；“anxiety”应改为形容词“anxious”；“interest”应改为形容词“interested”。

× I do not really remember if I have argument with my friend, but I think no because I'm a person who will not say something too.

✓ I do not really remember if I have an argument with my friend, but I think not because I'm a person who will not say something too.

“argument”前缺少冠词“an”，因为“argument”是可数名词。

× Like I'm at home and my at the at the same time, my friends are at school, but we want to chat through the iPhone.

✓ Like I'm at home and at the same time, my friends are at school, but we want to chat through the iPhone.

“my at the at the same time”中“my”多余，应删除。

× But if I met Johnson really maybe annoying or like anxiety, I will talk to my friends.

✓ But if I meet Johnson and he is really annoying or anxious, I will talk to my friends.

缺少主语“he”，导致句子不完整。

× Now just like what I just said, I would have changed my prayers about things which doesn't switch really made me or made her anxiety or interest or something.

✓ Now just like what I just said, I would have changed my phrases about things which don't really make me or her anxious or interested or something.

“made her anxiety”中“her”指代不清，应改为“her anxious”形容词形式。

× I do not really remember if I have argument with my friend, but I think no because I'm a person who will not say something too.

✓ I do not really remember if I have an argument with my friend, but I think not because I'm a person who will not say something too.

“say something too”表达不清，应改为“say something that might break relationships”或类似表达。