Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够自然，句子结构混乱，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子，直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps us stay connected, especially when we are far apart. For example, we often share our daily experiences and feelings through messages.

提案: 回答内容不明确，语法错误较多，缺乏连贯性。建议直接说明聊天内容，并用连接词组织句子。

例: I usually chat with my friends about different topics, such as school subjects when I have questions, or personal experiences that I want to share.

提案: 表达有些重复且不够流畅。建议简化表达，明确说明偏好并用连接词衔接理由。

例: It depends on my mood. I prefer chatting one-on-one when I want to discuss personal matters, but I also enjoy group chats to share ideas with many friends.

提案: 回答不够清晰，句子结构混乱，表达含糊。建议直接表达偏好并说明原因，避免无关内容。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps us understand each other's feelings better. However, sometimes I use video calls when meeting in person is not possible.

提案: 回答语法错误多，表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达观点，并说明原因。

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when our opinions are different. I think it's normal to have disagreements occasionally.

× Yes, here. This is the era of modern means and technology and chatting with friends helps to create our friendship stronger and help to share our emotions and others.

✓ Yes, here. This is the era of modern means and technology, and chatting with friends helps to make our friendship stronger and helps to share our emotions with others.

句中 'helps to create our friendship stronger' 中 'create' 应改为 'make'，因为 'make something stronger' 是固定搭配，且 'helps to share our emotions and others' 中缺少介词 'with'，应为 'share our emotions with others'。

× While we are far from each other.

✓ This is especially helpful when we are far from each other.

该句为不完整句，缺少主句，需补充完整表达。

× About my friends are of different kind of subject or course will really course related matters when I get confusion to each other as well as I want to share.

✓ My friends have different kinds of subjects or courses, and we usually discuss course-related matters when I am confused or want to share something.

原句结构混乱，缺少主谓一致，且表达不清晰，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I like to prefer chatting shingle with my friends to share our personal perspectives of perspectives or ideas or personal things related to our daily life.

✓ I prefer chatting single with my friends to share our personal perspectives, ideas, or personal things related to our daily life.

'like to prefer' 表达重复，应选用 'prefer'；'shingle' 应为 'single'；'perspectives of perspectives' 重复，应简化。

× But I usually prefer also chatting groups, says I have to share.

✓ But I also usually prefer chatting in groups when I have something to share.

'prefer also chatting groups' 语序错误，应为 'also prefer chatting in groups'；'says' 用法错误，应改为 'when'。

× I prefer to communicate face to face rather than social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media.

'rather than social media' 缺少介词，正确表达应为 'rather than via social media'。

× Is a chatting with communicating or chatting with face to face.

✓ Chatting face to face helps to strengthen our mood and helps us understand each other better.

原句结构不完整且不通顺，需重组句子表达完整意思。

× Helps to strengthen our mood or helps to make us more year understanding.

✓ It helps to strengthen our mood and makes us more understanding of each other.

'more year understanding' 词语错误，应为 'more understanding'；连接词 'or' 应改为 'and'。

× But in some kind of VA video.

✓ But sometimes, video calls can also be helpful.

该句不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整。

× Up. Yes, sometimes I need to argue with my friends if I doesn't.

✓ Yes, sometimes I need to argue with my friends if I don't agree with them.

'doesn't' 用于第一人称错误，应为 'don't'；句子不完整，需补充完整表达。

× If it doesn't meet up with my condition or opinion, I probably argue with my friends in.

✓ If their opinions don't meet my conditions or opinions, I probably argue with my friends.

句子结构混乱，'meet up with my condition or opinion' 表达不当，应改为 'their opinions don't meet my conditions or opinions'；句尾 'in' 多余。