Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and avoid repeating the same idea. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons or examples. For instance, instead of repeating 'chat with my friends' multiple times, you could say: 'Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I feel lonely or face problems, because sharing my thoughts with them helps me feel better.'

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I feel lonely or face problems, because sharing my thoughts with them helps me feel better.

提案: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Try to organise your ideas clearly and avoid hesitation sounds. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically. For example, you could say: 'I usually chat about my homework, especially when I have difficulties finding answers. Besides that, we also talk about how we spent our day.'

例: I usually chat about my homework, especially when I have difficulties finding answers. Besides that, we also talk about how we spent our day.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect your points. For example: 'I prefer chatting in a group because it is more enjoyable and fun. Also, it allows me to understand different perspectives and how others think.'

例: I prefer chatting in a group because it is more enjoyable and fun. Also, it allows me to understand different perspectives and how others think.

提案: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid filler words like 'MMM'. Also, use correct expressions such as 'prefer social media' instead of 'prefer prime social media'. For example: 'I prefer communicating via social media because I am an introvert and find it easier to express myself online than face-to-face.'

例: I prefer communicating via social media because I am an introvert and find it easier to express myself online than face-to-face.

提案: Your answer seems to misunderstand the question about arguing. Make sure to answer directly and clearly. For example: 'Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions or misunderstandings.'

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends when we have different opinions or misunderstandings.

× I like chatting with my friends when I feel lonely and when I suffer from problem

✓ I like chatting with my friends when I feel lonely and when I suffer from problems

The word 'problem' should be plural 'problems' because it refers to multiple issues one might suffer from, not just a single problem.

× I share my problems with my friends and I enjoy a lot when I talk with my friends and chat with my friends.

✓ I share my problems with my friends and I enjoy it a lot when I talk and chat with them.

Repetition of 'my friends' is unnecessary; 'them' is more natural. Also, 'enjoy a lot' should be 'enjoy it a lot' to be grammatically correct.

× I usually discuss about, uh, my homework

✓ I usually discuss, uh, my homework

The verb 'discuss' does not require the preposition 'about'. Saying 'discuss about' is incorrect.

× I ask my friend the answers and we chat about like how we spend today and what was the.

✓ I ask my friend for the answers and we chat about how we spent today and what happened.

'Ask my friend the answers' is incorrect; it should be 'ask my friend for the answers'. Also, 'how we spend today' should be past tense 'how we spent today' to match the context.

× I ask my friend the answers and we chat about like how we spend today and what was the.

✓ I ask my friend for the answers and we chat about how we spent today and what happened.

The phrase 'chat about like' is incorrect; 'like' is unnecessary here. Also, 'what was the' is incomplete and unclear; 'what happened' is a better expression.

× I prefer to chat in Group of people because, uh, if you talk, if you chat in Group, then we, it will be more enjoyable and it will be more funnier.

✓ I prefer to chat in a group of people because, uh, if you chat in a group, it will be more enjoyable and more fun.

'Group' should be preceded by an article 'a'. 'More funnier' is incorrect because 'funnier' already implies comparison; 'more fun' is correct.

× So I prefer chatting in Group rather than alone. Only one.

✓ So I prefer chatting in a group rather than alone, with only one person.

'In Group' needs an article 'a'. 'Only one' is incomplete; specifying 'only one person' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer prime social media because I am an introvert person so I can't talk face to face and if we talk in social media then I will talk more in terms of face to face.

✓ I prefer primarily social media because I am an introverted person, so I can't talk face to face, and if we talk on social media, then I will talk more than face to face.

'Prime social media' is incorrect; 'primarily social media' is appropriate. 'Introvert person' should be 'introverted person'. 'Talk in social media' should be 'talk on social media'. 'More in terms of face to face' is unclear; 'more than face to face' is better.

× So I prefer talking in social media.

✓ So I prefer talking on social media.

The correct preposition with 'social media' is 'on', not 'in'.

× Yes, I agree with my friends sometimes when they don't understand or they don't know what to do.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when they don't understand or don't know what to do.

The question asks if the student argues with friends, but the answer says 'I agree', which contradicts the question. The correct verb is 'argue'. Also, 'sometimes' is better placed before the verb for natural flow.