Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đơn giản, tự nhiên hơn. Hãy tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể, có liên kết logic.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me share interesting stories and understand their thoughts better. This strengthens our relationships and makes our conversations meaningful.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và từ vựng để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lặp từ. Nội dung nên cụ thể và có cấu trúc rõ ràng.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our studies at school, daily life, and hobbies. We also discuss upcoming plans and assignments for our classes.

提案: Câu trả lời chưa hoàn chỉnh và thiếu rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết và hoàn thiện ý tưởng. Sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và có liên kết.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows me to share fun stories and have deeper conversations about our lives.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Hãy bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it helps me build stronger friendships. We can share stories and enjoy activities together, which is more meaningful than online chatting.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thiện ý tưởng với ví dụ cụ thể.

例: Sometimes, I argue with my friends when we have different opinions about class projects. However, we always try to solve problems by discussing them calmly.

× I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I have more fun story to tell with my friends and I also make concerns about the life and the better relationship for my friends.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I have more fun stories to tell and I also have concerns about life and better relationships for my friends.

The noun 'story' should be plural 'stories' to match 'more fun'. Also, 'make concerns' is incorrect; it should be 'have concerns'. 'The life' should be 'life' without 'the' because it is general. 'The better relationship' should be plural 'better relationships' to match 'friends'.

× Besides, I and my friend also understand thought and personality.

✓ Besides, my friend and I also understand thoughts and personalities.

The correct order is 'my friend and I'. 'Thought' and 'personality' should be plural to match the context of multiple thoughts and personalities.

× I usually just about with my friend about study at school and a life in A and life and a hobbies.

✓ I usually just chat with my friend about studying at school, life in A, and hobbies.

The sentence structure is incorrect and unclear. 'Just about with my friend about study' is incorrect; it should be 'just chat with my friend about studying'. 'A life in A and life and a hobbies' is unclear and redundant; corrected to 'life in A and hobbies'.

× Besides, I am, uh, my friend often just about the information planned in class.

✓ Besides, my friend and I often just talk about the information planned in class.

The phrase 'I am, uh, my friend often just about' is incorrect and confusing. It should be 'my friend and I often just talk about'. 'Just about' needs a verb like 'talk' to be correct.

× I think that I prefer to chat with my friends because, uh, when I chat with uh, her, I have more time to tell fun story about life and uh, ability in uh, their life.

✓ I think that I prefer to chat with my friends because when I chat with her, I have more time to tell fun stories about life and abilities in their lives.

'Fun story' should be plural 'fun stories'. 'Ability' should be plural 'abilities'. 'Their life' should be 'their lives' to match plural possessive pronoun.

× In addition, I also.

✓ In addition, I also enjoy chatting with them.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a verb or object. It needs to be completed to make sense.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I can make more friends in my life and I also talk to them about many story and play many games.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can make more friends in my life, and I also talk to them about many stories and play many games.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adverb. 'Many story' should be plural 'many stories'.

× I sometimes argue with my friend because in some plan in class, I and uh, my friend also uh helps accuse uh for the problem uh, the informations about the uh planned environment.

✓ I sometimes argue with my friend because in some plans in class, my friend and I also help address the problems, the information about the planned environment.

'Plan' should be plural 'plans'. 'I and my friend' should be 'my friend and I'. 'Helps accuse' is incorrect; 'help address' is more appropriate. 'Informations' is uncountable and should be 'information'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.