Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp, hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng. Ngoài ra, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. I usually talk to them every day when I have free time, but sometimes I need to focus on my studies, so I can't chat as much as I want.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và hoàn chỉnh câu trả lời, tránh nói lắp và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc. Hãy cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể và hoàn chỉnh ý tưởng của mình.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives and experiences. For example, during video calls or messages, we share stories about school, work, or interesting things that have happened recently. I enjoy these conversations because they keep us close.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Hãy chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh để ý tưởng được truyền đạt rõ ràng hơn.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because I feel more comfortable sharing personal stories in private. For example, when I have important or sensitive matters to discuss, I usually choose my best friend because I trust him to listen.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc viết sai từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn để thể hiện ý kiến của bạn một cách hiệu quả.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face rather than via social media because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions better through facial expressions and tone of voice. For example, when I talk to my friends in person, I feel more connected and confident.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn chưa hoàn chỉnh và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như nói lắp. Hãy luyện tập trả lời đầy đủ, rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I think everyone argues with their friends sometimes. It's unavoidable when misunderstandings happen or mistakes are made, but we usually resolve them quickly.

× Chatting with friends yes, I really really enjoyed chatting with my friends because it's having me relax and stay connected with them.

✓ Chatting with friends, yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected with them.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it's having me relax' which is not a correct verb form here. The verb 'have' should be replaced with 'helps' to express the function of chatting. Also, 'enjoyed' is past tense but the context suggests a habitual action, so 'enjoy' in present tense is appropriate.

× I usually talk to them every day when I have free time but sometime I have to focus on study or doing homework so I can't just as much as I can I want.

✓ I usually talk to them every day when I have free time, but sometimes I have to focus on studying or doing homework, so I can't talk as much as I want.

The word 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'focus on study' is incorrect; it should be 'focus on studying' because 'focus on' requires a gerund. The phrase 'can't just as much as I can I want' is ungrammatical and corrected to 'can't talk as much as I want' for clarity and correctness.

× Uh, for examples, when we have video call on messages ask ask, we send story about school, work or interesting thing what that's happened recently.

✓ For example, when we have video calls or messages, we send stories about school, work, or interesting things that have happened recently.

The phrase 'for examples' should be 'for example' as it is used to introduce an example. 'Video call on messages ask ask' is unclear and corrected to 'video calls or messages'. 'Send story' should be plural 'send stories' to match plural subjects. 'Interesting thing what that's happened' is incorrect; it should be 'interesting things that have happened'.

× I usually choose my best friends because I choose him and I know he will listen.

✓ I usually choose my best friend because I trust him and I know he will listen.

'Best friends' should be singular 'best friend' to match 'him'. Also, 'choose him' is awkward; 'trust him' better expresses the intended meaning. Pronoun usage is corrected for clarity and agreement.

× MMM I prefer to communicate fair to federators and via social media because it's allow me to understand the other person's emotions better, growth and vicious expressions and tone of voice.

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face and via social media because it allows me to understand the other person's emotions better, including facial expressions and tone of voice.

'Fair to federators' is a mishearing or typo for 'face-to-face'. 'It's allow' should be 'it allows' for subject-verb agreement. 'Growth and vicious expressions' is incorrect; it should be 'facial expressions'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, we're not, I think every people will argue with friends.

✓ Yes, we do. I think everyone will argue with friends.

'We're not' is incorrect in this context; 'we do' is appropriate. 'Every people' is incorrect; 'everyone' is the correct singular indefinite pronoun. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and pronoun usage.