Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid repeating the same phrase and provide a reason or example to make your answer more natural and effective. For instance, explain why you enjoy chatting or what you gain from it.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends and family because it helps me stay connected and share interesting stories about our lives.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using linking words and more specific details. Instead of listing topics, try to connect them smoothly and give examples.

例: I usually chat about our daily routines, such as what we did during the day, and often discuss our homework assignments to help each other.

提案: Avoid filler sounds like 'MMM' and try to express your ideas more clearly and naturally. Also, use linking words to explain your preference with reasons.

例: I usually prefer chatting with just one friend because I have a small circle of close friends, so I find one-on-one conversations more comfortable and meaningful.

提案: Try to improve grammar and sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about your communication methods.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because most of my friends live abroad, so we can't meet face-to-face often. Therefore, we usually chat through messaging apps or video calls.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be enhanced by adding a reason or example to support your statement, making it more engaging.

例: No, I rarely argue with my friends because I believe it's important to maintain harmony, and I usually try to resolve any disagreements calmly.

× I usually chat about our daily routines and what we do today, and our basic talk is about our homework.

✓ I usually chat about our daily routines and what we do each day, and our basic talk is about our homework.

The phrase 'what we do today' is incorrect when referring to habitual actions. 'Today' refers to the current day, but the sentence is about usual topics, so 'each day' or 'every day' is more appropriate to indicate habitual present tense.

× I prefer to communicate in social media because my most of friends are in abroad so we can't meet face to face so I usually talk them in social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate via social media because most of my friends are abroad, so we can't meet face to face, so I usually talk to them on social media.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'social media'; 'via' or 'on' is correct. 'My most of friends' should be 'most of my friends'. 'Are in abroad' is incorrect; 'are abroad' is correct. Also, 'talk them' needs the preposition 'to' as in 'talk to them'. Using correct prepositions improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.