Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I very love' nên là 'I really love'. Ngoài ra, bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and stay connected. Usually, we talk about our homework or school activities, which makes our conversations interesting and useful.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như 'I usually chat about it with my friends'. Câu trả lời cần có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our homework and the drama happening in our class. Besides that, we often talk about plans to go out and have fun together, which helps me feel relaxed.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp như 'prefer judging with one thing'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, giải thích rõ lý do và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để thể hiện ý kiến cá nhân.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because I am an introvert and feel more comfortable in small groups. Also, as a student, I have limited time, so one-on-one conversations are more manageable for me.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng. Hãy giải thích lý do tại sao bạn thích giao tiếp trực tiếp hoặc qua mạng xã hội một cách cụ thể và tự nhiên.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face with my friends because it feels more personal. However, when talking to people I don't know well, I usually use social media as it is more convenient.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'I own way agree'. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, giải thích rõ ràng về việc tranh luận với bạn bè và cảm xúc của bạn về điều đó.

例: Yes, sometimes I argue with my friends, especially when we discuss our homework or class topics. I enjoy these debates because they help me understand different opinions and improve my thinking.

× I very love chatting with my friends or go with my friends.

✓ I really love chatting with my friends or going out with them.

The verb 'love' should be followed by a gerund (-ing form) when expressing likes or preferences. Also, 'very' is incorrectly used; 'really' is more appropriate here. Additionally, 'go with my friends' should be 'going out with my friends' to maintain parallel structure and correct verb form.

× But uh, I usually chatting with my friends to uh as to ask for homework and adjust it to a drama in my class.

✓ But uh, I usually chat with my friends to ask about homework and adjust it for a drama in my class.

The verb 'usually' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'chat' (not 'chatting'). Also, 'as to ask' is incorrect; it should be 'to ask'. 'Adjust it to a drama' should be 'adjust it for a drama' to use the correct preposition.

× I usually chat about it with my friends and I I feel relaxed and unwise.

✓ I usually chat about it with my friends and I feel relaxed and unworried.

The word 'unwise' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'unworried' or 'relaxed'. Also, the repeated 'I' is a mistake.

× Uh, in my opinions, I prefer judging with one thing because uh, am inch I'm a introvert person so that when I chat the with a group of people, I cannot comfortable in a while and I'm a student so that I don't have enough time because I will talk about with my study.

✓ Uh, in my opinion, I prefer chatting with one person because I am an introvert. When I chat with a group of people, I cannot feel comfortable for a while. Also, I am a student so I don't have enough time because I need to study.

The phrase 'in my opinions' should be singular 'in my opinion'. 'Judging with one thing' is incorrect; likely meant 'chatting with one person'. 'Am inch' is a typo and should be 'I am'. 'A introvert' should be 'an introvert' due to vowel sound. 'Chat the with a group' is incorrect; should be 'chat with a group'. 'Cannot comfortable' should be 'cannot feel comfortable'. 'Talk about with my study' is incorrect; should be 'need to study'.

× I think that's uh, different in timelines because I very, uh, I very love to communicate first to face with my friends, but I don't think so when I communicate face to face with, uh, another people I don't know.

✓ I think that's different in timing because I really love to communicate face to face with my friends, but I don't think so when I communicate face to face with people I don't know.

'Different in timelines' is incorrect; 'different in timing' or 'different at times' is better. 'I very love' is incorrect; 'I really love' is correct. 'Communicate first to face' should be 'communicate face to face'. 'Another people' is incorrect; 'other people' or just 'people' is correct.

× So that I refer this via social media then.

✓ So I prefer to use social media then.

'Refer' is incorrect here; the correct modal verb is 'prefer to use'. 'So that' is unnecessary and awkward in this context.

× I own way agree with my friends like we are discuss about our homework and we are debate to our family in my class and I think I'm very happy to this because I can uh, talk with more with my friends.

✓ I somewhat agree with my friends. We discuss our homework and debate about our family in my class. I think I'm very happy about this because I can talk more with my friends.

'Own way agree' is incorrect; 'somewhat agree' or 'I agree in my own way' is better. 'We are discuss' should be 'we discuss'. 'Debate to our family' should be 'debate about our family'. 'Happy to this' should be 'happy about this'. 'Talk with more with my friends' should be 'talk more with my friends'.