Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ phù hợp hơn. Bạn nên dùng câu đơn giản, tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I'm at home. It helps me stay connected with them and we often share funny videos or memes on platforms like TikTok.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, tránh lặp từ và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cụ thể hơn về nội dung trò chuyện.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives to keep in touch. Besides that, we often discuss homework and share funny videos to lighten the mood.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp, nội dung không mạch lạc. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, tránh thông tin không liên quan và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh.

例: I prefer chatting with one close friend because it feels more personal and meaningful. We usually talk about our homework and share funny videos to make each other laugh.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và phát âm, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn. Hãy diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng và tự nhiên.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because I am shy when talking face-to-face. Platforms like Instagram Messenger let me take my time before sending messages, which makes me feel more comfortable.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh sử dụng từ không phù hợp và nói lắp. Hãy dùng câu đơn giản, dễ hiểu.

例: Sometimes, I argue with my friends when we discuss homework. For example, if we have different answers, we debate to find the correct one. These discussions help us understand each other better.

× I'm really interested in chatting with my friends especially when I'm at home I can meet them.

✓ I'm really interested in chatting with my friends, especially when I'm at home and can meet them.

The original sentence lacks a conjunction to connect two independent clauses, causing a run-on sentence. Adding 'and' properly connects the ideas, improving sentence structure.

× Chatting with my friends is a perfect way that make I keep in touch with them and share some funny videos like memes or videos or Tiktok.

✓ Chatting with my friends is a perfect way that helps me keep in touch with them and share some funny videos like memes or TikTok videos.

The sentence has subject-verb agreement errors ('make I' should be 'helps me') and awkward phrasing. Correcting the verb and pronoun improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I text to my friend every day.

✓ I text my friend every day.

The verb 'text' does not require the preposition 'to' when indicating the recipient. Removing 'to' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× We always share about stories of daily life to stay connect with each other.

✓ We always share stories of daily life to stay connected with each other.

The verb 'share' does not need the preposition 'about' in this context. Also, 'connect' should be 'connected' to function as an adjective here.

× Moreover, I I usually have him about his homework and we often share some funny videos.

✓ Moreover, I usually ask him about his homework and we often share some funny videos.

The phrase 'have him about his homework' is incorrect. The correct verb is 'ask' to indicate inquiring about homework. Also, the repeated 'I' is a typographical error.

× To be honest I don't have any friends so I often tend to chat with my close friends.

✓ To be honest, I don't have many friends, so I often tend to chat with my close friends.

The original sentence is contradictory ('don't have any friends' but 'chat with my close friends'). Changing 'any' to 'many' resolves this inconsistency and improves clarity.

× We always because our homework and also share some funny videos on TikTok, YouTube to make each other laugh.

✓ We always do our homework together and also share some funny videos on TikTok and YouTube to make each other laugh.

The phrase 'We always because our homework' is incorrect. It should be 'do our homework together' to convey the intended meaning.

× I think Chucky's only friend is more meaningful.

✓ I think chatting with only one friend is more meaningful.

'Chucky's only friend' is likely a mishearing or typo. The intended meaning is 'chatting with only one friend.' Correcting this clarifies the sentence.

× In my opinion, I prefer communicating via social media rather than face to face because I'm really shy when talking with my friends in person.

✓ In my opinion, I prefer communicating via social media rather than face-to-face because I'm really shy when talking with my friends in person.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb.

× For example, some platform like Instagram messenger allow me take take my time before I uh, send the message.

✓ For example, some platforms like Instagram Messenger allow me to take my time before I send the message.

'Allow me take' is incorrect; it should be 'allow me to take.' Also, 'platform' should be plural 'platforms' to agree with 'some.' The repeated 'take' is a typo.

× It's make me more comfortable.

✓ It makes me more comfortable.

The subject 'It' requires the verb 'makes' in third person singular form, not 'make.'

× To be honest, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially discussing our homework.

✓ To be honest, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when discussing our homework.

The phrase 'especially discussing' is incomplete; adding 'when' clarifies the timing of the argument.

× Uh, for example, when I give him an answer and he say another answer, we often have a confrontation to indicate the correct answer.

✓ For example, when I give him an answer and he says another answer, we often have a confrontation to determine the correct answer.

'He say' should be 'he says' for subject-verb agreement. Also, 'indicate' is not the best verb here; 'determine' fits better.

× The discount this confrontation have us uh, understand each other better.

✓ Despite this confrontation, it helps us understand each other better.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Rephrasing improves clarity and grammatical correctness.