Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with clear and simple sentences. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for better clarity.

例: Yes, I like chatting with friends, especially those who have a friendly character. However, I avoid talking to people who are jealous or say unpleasant things.

提案: Your answer covers relevant topics but is a bit disorganized and repetitive. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific. Also, avoid filler words like 'umm' and improve sentence flow.

例: Usually, I chat with my friends about Korean stars, delicious food nearby, and our emotional experiences. For example, we often discuss our feelings towards others and share restaurant recommendations.

提案: Your answer expresses your opinion clearly but has some grammatical mistakes and redundancy. Try to use linking words to make your answer more coherent and concise.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because group conversations often involve gossip and negative talk. One-on-one chats feel more genuine and comfortable to me.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some unclear phrases like 'thick face'. Use clearer vocabulary and link your ideas logically. Also, avoid incomplete sentences.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can feel the person's real emotions in real time. On social media, people often hide their true feelings, so it's hard to really know them.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but the grammar and sentence structure need improvement. Use linking words to connect your points and express your thoughts more clearly.

例: It depends on the situation. I believe friendship requires tolerance and respect. Therefore, if possible, I prefer to express my feelings calmly instead of arguing.

× It's depends of who are the people you some friendly character or the person is not very good and they will jealous or say something you don't want.

✓ It depends on who the people are, whether they have a friendly character or not, because some people are not very good and they will be jealous or say things you don't want.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'It's depends' instead of 'It depends' (modal verb usage). Also, 'depends of' should be 'depends on'. The sentence structure is complex and needs rephrasing for clarity. Modal verb 'will' is correctly used for future prediction, but 'they will jealous' is incorrect; it should be 'they will be jealous' because 'jealous' is an adjective and needs the verb 'be'.

× It's depends of who are the people you some friendly character or the person is not very good and they will jealous or say something you don't want.

✓ It depends on who the people are, whether they have a friendly character or not, because some people are not very good and they will be jealous or say things you don't want.

The phrase 'depends of' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'depends on'. Prepositions are important to show relationships between words, and using the wrong one can confuse meaning.

× It's depends of who are the people you some friendly character or the person is not very good and they will jealous or say something you don't want.

✓ It depends on who the people are, whether they have a friendly character or not, because some people are not very good and they will be jealous or say things you don't want.

The phrase 'It's depends' is incorrect because 'depends' should agree with the subject 'It'. The correct form is 'It depends'. Also, 'they will jealous' lacks the verb 'be' to agree with the subject and verb structure.

× It's depends of who are the people you some friendly character or the person is not very good and they will jealous or say something you don't want.

✓ It depends on who the people are, whether they have a friendly character or not, because some people are not very good and they will be jealous or say things you don't want.

The pronoun usage is unclear and confusing. 'You some friendly character' is incorrect; it should be 'whether they have a friendly character'. Proper pronouns help clarify who or what is being referred to.

× With girls, maybe we'll chat about those umm, Korean star and what is delicious around us, what which restaurant and talk about our emotional experience, our feeling towards the others.

✓ With girls, maybe we'll chat about those, umm, Korean stars and what is delicious around us, which restaurants, and talk about our emotional experiences and our feelings towards others.

The phrase 'what which restaurant' is incorrect; 'which' is the correct determiner here. Also, 'towards the others' should be 'towards others' without 'the' to generalize. Prepositions and determiners must be used correctly to convey precise meaning.

× With girls, maybe we'll chat about those umm, Korean star and what is delicious around us, what which restaurant and talk about our emotional experience, our feeling towards the others.

✓ With girls, maybe we'll chat about those, umm, Korean stars and what is delicious around us, which restaurants, and talk about our emotional experiences and our feelings towards others.

The singular 'Korean star' should be plural 'Korean stars' to match 'those'. Similarly, 'emotional experience' and 'feeling' should be plural to match the context of multiple experiences and feelings.

× I find the relationship of a group of people is always just too much in in it just there's some gossip or someone will speak in other bad words behind someone so I hate it.

✓ I find the relationship in a group of people is always just too much; there is some gossip or someone will speak bad words about others behind their backs, so I hate it.

The phrase 'relationship of a group' should be 'relationship in a group'. Also, 'speak in other bad words behind someone' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'speak bad words about others behind their backs'. Prepositions are important to express correct relationships.

× I find the relationship of a group of people is always just too much in in it just there's some gossip or someone will speak in other bad words behind someone so I hate it.

✓ I find the relationship in a group of people is always just too much; there is some gossip or someone will speak bad words about others behind their backs, so I hate it.

The pronouns 'someone' and 'someone' are vague and repetitive. Using 'others' and 'their backs' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence flow.

× I find the relationship of a group of people is always just too much in in it just there's some gossip or someone will speak in other bad words behind someone so I hate it.

✓ I find the relationship in a group of people is always just too much; there is some gossip or someone will speak bad words about others behind their backs, so I hate it.

The original sentence is run-on and confusing. Breaking it into clearer parts with proper punctuation improves readability and understanding.

× And I think there's some little circle so I prefer only with one friend, it's more real.

✓ And I think there are some small cliques, so I prefer to be with only one friend; it's more real.

'Some little circle' is unclear; 'small cliques' is more appropriate. Also, 'prefer only with one friend' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer to be with only one friend'. Pronouns and prepositions must be used correctly for clarity.

× Sure, it will be face to face because I can.

✓ Sure, I prefer face-to-face communication because I can.

'It will be face to face because I can' is awkward and unclear. Using 'I prefer' expresses preference clearly. Modal verb 'can' is incomplete here; the sentence needs a clearer verb or expression.

× I think face to face you can feel the present emotion in the real time.

✓ I think face-to-face, you can feel the present emotion in real time.

'In the real time' should be 'in real time' without 'the'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective or adverb.

× But in the social media people always show their thick face and it is not really correct information for that person.

✓ But on social media, people always show their fake faces, and the information is not really accurate about that person.

'Thick face' is a literal translation and incorrect here; 'fake faces' or 'false image' is more appropriate. Also, 'correct information' should be 'accurate information'. Adjectives must be used correctly to convey intended meaning.

× I can't really know a person through social media.

✓ I can't really get to know a person through social media.

The phrase 'know a person through social media' is acceptable but 'get to know' is more natural in this context. Prepositions are correct here.

× It based on the situation because for example, I think friendship is tolerance the others and respect the other.

✓ It depends on the situation because, for example, I think friendship is about tolerating others and respecting them.

'It based on' is incorrect; the modal verb 'depends' is needed. Also, 'tolerance the others' should be 'tolerating others'. Modal verbs and verb forms must be used correctly.

× It based on the situation because for example, I think friendship is tolerance the others and respect the other.

✓ It depends on the situation because, for example, I think friendship is about tolerating others and respecting them.

The phrase 'friendship is tolerance the others' is incorrect; it should be 'friendship is about tolerating others'. Prepositions like 'about' are necessary to connect ideas properly.

× So if it is not necessarily it's need not to argue with, you can just simply express your feeling or the truth to them.

✓ So if it is not necessary, you don't need to argue; you can just simply express your feelings or the truth to them.

'It's need not to argue with' is incorrect modal verb usage. The correct form is 'you don't need to argue'. Modal verbs express necessity or obligation and must be used properly.