Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and grammatical errors such as 'love to chatting'. Use a clear topic sentence and support it with a reason. For example, say 'Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us build a closer bond.'

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps us build a closer bond and strengthens our friendship.

提案: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas clearly. For example, 'We usually chat about planning trips or get-togethers, and sometimes we discuss classwork or homework.'

例: We usually chat about planning trips or get-togethers, and sometimes we discuss classwork or homework to help each other.

提案: Work on sentence clarity and avoid repetition. Use linking words to organize your answer. For example, 'I prefer chatting in a small group with my two close friends on WhatsApp, where we share our daily experiences and stories.'

例: I prefer chatting in a small group with my two close friends on WhatsApp, where we share our daily experiences and stories.

提案: Avoid filler words and repetition. Use clear linking words and concise sentences. For example, 'I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to express our feelings more accurately than chatting online.'

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows us to express our feelings more accurately than chatting online.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid filler words. Use linking words to explain your opinion. For example, 'No, I usually avoid arguments with friends because we understand each other's feelings and respect different opinions.'

例: No, I usually avoid arguments with friends because we understand each other's feelings and respect different opinions.

× Yes, I love to chatting with my friends because I think we have, we uh, we can make a bond with them, uh, more friendly.

✓ Yes, I love chatting with my friends because I think we can make a bond with them, more friendly.

The verb 'love' is followed by the gerund form 'chatting', not the infinitive 'to chatting'. Also, 'we have, we uh,' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× Like we are usually chat about, uh, about the things that we have to plan something to, to travel or to get together with them.

✓ We usually chat about things like planning to travel or get together with them.

The phrase 'we are usually chat' is incorrect; the correct present simple form is 'we usually chat'. Also, the sentence is restructured for clarity and naturalness.

× And also sometimes we are talking about the classwork or a homework.

✓ Sometimes we also talk about classwork or homework.

The present continuous 'we are talking' is not appropriate here; the simple present 'we talk' is used for habitual actions. Also, 'a homework' is incorrect as 'homework' is uncountable.

× Basically, I have only two friends, I'm chatting with them, we create a group or a group in the on the WhatsApp.

✓ Basically, I have only two friends. I'm chatting with them; we created a group on WhatsApp.

The phrase 'a group or a group in the on the WhatsApp' is redundant and incorrect. 'WhatsApp' does not need 'the'. Also, past tense 'created' fits better for the action of making a group.

× We we three of them chatting with the with each other and also a lot of talk with their experiences and daily life things.

✓ The three of us chat with each other a lot and talk about their experiences and daily life.

The phrase 'We we three of them chatting' is ungrammatical. Correct subject-verb agreement and sentence structure are applied. 'Chat' is used in simple present for habitual action.

× And my point of view, I think I prefer to, uh, communicate face to face rather than the social media because if we are together, we express our feelings more accurately rather than the chatting.

✓ In my point of view, I think I prefer to communicate face to face rather than via social media because when we are together, we express our feelings more accurately than when chatting.

The phrase 'And my point of view' is corrected to 'In my point of view'. 'Rather than the social media' is incorrect; 'via social media' is appropriate. Also, 'rather than the chatting' is corrected to 'than when chatting' for clarity.

× So I prefer to do to do enjoy face to face.

✓ So I prefer to enjoy face-to-face communication.

The phrase 'to do to do enjoy' is redundant and incorrect. 'Face to face' is better hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× No, I'm not that kind of person who argue with the French because we, we understand our, understand our emotions and feelings.

✓ No, I'm not the kind of person who argues with friends because we understand our emotions and feelings.

'Who argue' should be 'who argues' to agree with singular 'person'. 'The French' is incorrect; likely meant 'friends'. Repetition 'we, we understand our' is removed.

× What, what the other person have to say that.

✓ We listen to what the other person has to say.

The original sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical. Correct subject-verb agreement 'person has' is used and sentence completed for clarity.

× So it is OK to have if, uh, the someone is not, uh, agree with you, it's OK to, uh, it's OK.

✓ So it is OK if someone does not agree with you; it's fine.

'The someone' is incorrect; 'someone' is used without 'the'. 'Is not agree' should be 'does not agree'. The sentence is simplified for clarity.