Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 답변이 자연스럽고 효과적이지만, 'umm'과 같은 불필요한 말버릇을 줄이고 문장을 더 간결하게 만드는 것이 좋습니다. 또한, 구체적인 예시를 추가하여 내용을 풍부하게 하면 더 좋습니다.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relieve stress. For example, we often share funny memes and update each other on our recent experiences.

提案: 답변이 다소 중복되고 불필요한 말버릇이 많습니다. 핵심 내용을 명확히 하고, 구체적인 주제나 예시를 들어 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: We usually talk about trending memes, popular gossip, and sometimes share our concerns about the future, like career plans or personal goals.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 완성되지 않았고, 불필요한 말버릇이 많습니다. 문장을 완성하고 이유를 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because it allows for a deeper and more meaningful conversation compared to group chats.

提案: 답변이 미완성되고 불필요한 말버릇이 많아 이해하기 어렵습니다. 명확한 주제 문장과 이유를 완성된 문장으로 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more personal and helps me understand emotions better than social media.

提案: 답변이 문법적으로 완성되지 않았고, 반복되는 표현과 불필요한 말버릇이 많습니다. 명확하고 완성된 문장으로 자신의 생각을 표현하는 연습이 필요합니다.

例: Yes, sometimes we argue because we have different opinions. However, we usually discuss and negotiate to understand each other's viewpoints better.

× it makes me uh, reduce my stress level

✓ it helps me reduce my stress level

'makes me reduce' is awkward; 'helps me reduce' is more natural and grammatically correct when expressing assistance in reducing stress.

× during chatting with friends

✓ while chatting with friends

'during' is used with nouns, but 'chatting' here is a gerund phrase; 'while' is the correct conjunction to indicate simultaneous action.

× we can umm, catch up our stories

✓ we can umm, catch up on our stories

'catch up' requires the preposition 'on' when referring to stories or news; missing 'on' causes incorrect usage.

× we can share kind of trendy memes

✓ we can share kinds of trendy memes

'kind of' is singular; when referring to multiple types, 'kinds of' is correct to indicate variety.

× we chat about kind of umm, nothing special

✓ we chat about kind of umm, nothing special

No correction needed here as 'kind of' is used informally to mean 'somewhat'; no grammatical error.

× just like memes or trendy gossips

✓ just like memes or trendy gossip

'Gossip' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'gossips'.

× we can umm, share our worries for the future

✓ we can umm, share our worries about the future

'Worries about' is the correct prepositional phrase; 'worries for' is incorrect in this context.

× I prefer to chat with only one friend

✓ I prefer to chat with just one friend

'Just' is more natural than 'only' in this context to express preference for a single friend.

× it's easy to connect umm intensively with just one person more than a group and

✓ it's easier to connect intensively with just one person than with a group

Comparative form 'easier' is needed; 'more than a group' is awkward and should be 'than with a group' for clarity.

× I prefer to communicate face to face

✓ I prefer to communicate face-to-face

'Face-to-face' is a compound adjective and should be hyphenated when used as an adverbial phrase.

× social media and the technology can allow us to umm, meet people easier

✓ social media and technology can allow us to meet people more easily

'Easier' is an adjective; the adverb 'more easily' is required to modify the verb 'meet'.

× we have sometimes a different, different point of views

✓ we sometimes have different points of view

'Point of view' is singular; plural form is 'points of view'. Also, 'sometimes' placement is corrected for natural flow.

× So sometimes we need to like, umm, negotiate our opinions uh, which, which one is better or which one is right, something like that

✓ So sometimes we need to negotiate our opinions about which one is better or which one is right, something like that

'Like' is informal and unnecessary here; 'about' is needed to connect 'negotiate our opinions' with the content of negotiation.