Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้องและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น ใช้ 'chatting' ให้ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อน พร้อมทั้งจัดประโยคให้ชัดเจนและกระชับ

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends because I feel comfortable sharing my thoughts with them. However, I am less open when chatting with acquaintances as I prefer to keep my personality private.

提案: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงใช้ linking words เพื่อให้ประโยคเชื่อมโยงกันอย่างลื่นไหลและชัดเจน

例: We usually catch up on our lives since we only meet once a year. We love updating each other about what we are doing and making sure everyone is doing well.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงการใช้ไวยากรณ์ เช่น 'one friends' ควรเป็น 'one friend' และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหลของประโยค พร้อมทั้งหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อน

例: I prefer chatting with one friend when discussing personal matters. However, I usually enjoy chatting with a group for fun and light-hearted conversations.

提案: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'lack of ability' ควรใช้ 'lack the ability' และใช้ linking words เพื่อความชัดเจน

例: Personally, I prefer face-to-face communication because social media lacks the ability to convey facial expressions, so it's harder to understand what others truly think.

提案: ควรปรับปรุงไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ให้ถูกต้อง เช่น 'I am tend to' ควรเป็น 'I tend to' และใช้ประโยคที่ชัดเจนและกระชับมากขึ้น

例: I usually avoid arguing with my friends because I prefer to maintain good relationships and keep peace among us.

× Of course I love to chatting with my close friend, but if you are saying just friends wishes, I have a lot.

✓ Of course I love chatting with my close friend, but if you are saying just friends' wishes, I have a lot.

The verb 'love' should be followed by the gerund form 'chatting' not the infinitive 'to chatting'. Also, 'friends wishes' should be 'friends' wishes' to show possession.

× I think I am not that comfortable to chatting with them to have them knowing my personality that much.

✓ I think I am not that comfortable chatting with them to let them know my personality that much.

The phrase 'comfortable to chatting' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable chatting'. Also, 'to have them knowing' is incorrect; 'to let them know' is appropriate here.

× We usually are dating our life in the years because the time we are seeing each other is once a year and we are love to updating our life to each other to know what they are doing and the know they are OK.

✓ We usually update each other about our lives because we see each other only once a year, and we love to keep each other informed about what we are doing and to know that we are okay.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and verb forms. 'Are dating our life' is incorrect; 'update each other about our lives' is correct. Also, 'we are love to updating' should be 'we love to keep each other informed'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer chatting with one friends when it's come to something personal, but usually I want to chat with a group of people to like just having fun having like conversations or funny conversations with each other.

✓ I prefer chatting with one friend when it comes to something personal, but usually I want to chat with a group of people just to have fun and have conversations or funny conversations with each other.

'One friends' is incorrect; it should be 'one friend' (singular). Also, 'when it's come' should be 'when it comes'. The sentence is adjusted for correct singular/plural usage and verb tense.

× Personally I prefer to communicate face to face because when it comes to communicate with social media we are lack of ability to know the face of the of other people so we are not gonna know what they think.

✓ Personally, I prefer to communicate face to face because when it comes to communicating via social media, we lack the ability to see the faces of other people, so we don't know what they think.

'When it comes to communicate' should be 'when it comes to communicating'. 'Lack of ability' should be 'lack the ability'. 'Know the face of the of other people' is corrected to 'see the faces of other people'. Also, 'gonna' is informal and replaced with 'don't' for clarity.

× I am not that person who are want to like express their opinions and against each other that much.

✓ I am not the kind of person who wants to express their opinions and argue against each other that much.

'Who are want' is incorrect; it should be 'who wants'. Also, 'like express' is informal and unnecessary. 'Against each other' is better expressed as 'argue against each other' for clarity.

× So no, I am not arguing with my friends because I am tend to a relationship keeper.

✓ So no, I do not argue with my friends because I tend to be a relationship keeper.

'I am not arguing' is present continuous but here simple present 'I do not argue' is more appropriate. 'I am tend' is incorrect; it should be 'I tend to be'. The sentence is corrected for proper tense and verb form.