Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, I very like to chatting with friends because I think it is funny.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
We usually chat about what's delicious food we recently have eat and what interesting what interesting person we met in our daily life.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I'm more likely to chat with only one friends because the group of people make me feel nervous to chat with each other.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
I prefer to communicate by social media because it make me feel more relaxed and comfortable face to face make me feel nervous and I can't express myself clearly.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
Sometimes I will argue with my friends, although it is a very little things, we still have different opinion with each other.
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 60.0提案: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“very like to chatting”应改为“really like chatting”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免语法错误。
例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because I find it fun and relaxing.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 55.0提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误,如“what interesting what interesting person”重复且不自然,动词时态错误。建议简洁表达并注意时态和词序。
例: We usually talk about delicious food we've recently eaten and interesting people we've met in our daily lives.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误,如“only one friends”应为“only one friend”,以及“make me feel nervous to chat with each other”表达不自然。建议使用更准确的语法和自然表达。
例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because I feel nervous when talking in a group.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 60.0提案: 回答中缺少连接词,句子结构不完整,且有语法错误。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯,并注意主谓一致。
例: I prefer communicating via social media because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable, whereas face-to-face conversations make me nervous and I can't express myself clearly.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 65.0提案: 回答中有语法错误,如“a very little things”应为“very small things”,以及“different opinion”应为“different opinions”。建议注意单复数和表达准确性。
例: Sometimes I argue with my friends, but usually it's about small things because we have different opinions.
× Yes, I very like to chatting with friends because I think it is funny.
✓ Yes, I very like chatting with friends because I think it is funny.
动词like后面接动名词形式(-ing),而不是不定式to do。这里应使用'like chatting'。
× Yes, I very like to chatting with friends because I think it is funny.
✓ Yes, I really like chatting with friends because I think it is funny.
副词very不能修饰动词like,应该用really来加强语气。
× We usually chat about what's delicious food we recently have eat and what interesting what interesting person we met in our daily life.
✓ We usually chat about what delicious food we have recently eaten and what interesting person we have met in our daily life.
动词eat的过去分词是eaten,表示完成时态应使用have eaten;同时have eat是错误的时态搭配。
× We usually chat about what's delicious food we recently have eat and what interesting what interesting person we met in our daily life.
✓ We usually chat about what delicious food we have recently eaten and what interesting person we have met in our daily life.
重复使用'what interesting'是错误的,应去掉重复部分。
× I'm more likely to chat with only one friends because the group of people make me feel nervous to chat with each other.
✓ I'm more likely to chat with only one friend because the group of people makes me feel nervous to chat with each other.
'one'后面应接单数名词friend;主语the group是单数,谓语动词应为makes。
× I'm more likely to chat with only one friends because the group of people make me feel nervous to chat with each other.
✓ I'm more likely to chat with only one friend because the group of people makes me feel nervous to chat with each other.
主语the group是单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数makes。
× I prefer to communicate by social media because it make me feel more relaxed and comfortable face to face make me feel nervous and I can't express myself clearly.
✓ I prefer to communicate by social media because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable. Face to face makes me feel nervous and I can't express myself clearly.
主语it和face to face均为单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数makes。
× I prefer to communicate by social media because it make me feel more relaxed and comfortable face to face make me feel nervous and I can't express myself clearly.
✓ I prefer to communicate by social media because it makes me feel more relaxed and comfortable. Face to face makes me feel nervous and I can't express myself clearly.
原句缺少句号,导致句子结构混乱,应分成两个句子。
× Sometimes I will argue with my friends, although it is a very little things, we still have different opinion with each other.
✓ Sometimes I will argue with my friends, although it is a very little thing, we still have different opinions with each other.
'a very little things'中things应为单数thing;'different opinion'应为复数opinions。