Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如'relaxable'应为'relaxed'。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并避免重复。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel relaxed and happy.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如'favorite birds is'应为'favorite bird is'。建议简化句子结构，使用更准确的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: We usually talk about cute animals since we both like small, pretty creatures. For example, my favorite bird is the parrot.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，如'relaxable'应为'relaxed'。句子结构混乱，建议简化表达，使用连接词，并注意语法正确。

例: I prefer chatting with just one friend because large groups make me feel nervous and shy. Talking to one person helps me feel calm and relaxed.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点，使用连贯的句子，并避免语法错误。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more real and safe. On social media, I can't be sure if the person is genuine, and there are many risks online.

提案: 回答中语法错误和表达不够自然，如'different opinion'应为'different opinions'。建议使用更自然的表达，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: Yes, it's normal to argue sometimes. For example, we might disagree about where to have fun or go shopping.

× That makes me feel relaxable and happy.

✓ That makes me feel relaxed and happy.

“relaxable”不是正确的形容词，正确的形容词是“relaxed”，表示感到放松。应使用“relaxed”来描述人的感受。

× We usually chat about the cute animals because both of us all like the small pretty animals, especially birds, and my favorite birds is parrots.

✓ We usually chat about cute animals because both of us like small pretty animals, especially birds, and my favorite birds are parrots.

“both of us all”重复且冗余，应简化为“both of us”。“my favorite birds is parrots”中“birds”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“are”。

× Well, in my opinion, I just like chat with only one friend because a group of people there too many people and I will feel very scared to talk with a lot of people.

✓ Well, in my opinion, I just like chatting with only one friend because in a group of people there are too many people and I feel very scared to talk with a lot of people.

“like chat”应使用动名词形式“like chatting”。“a group of people there too many people”缺少谓语，应加“there are”。“I will feel”时态不合适，改为一般现在时“I feel”。

× That makes me very shy you know, and only one person can let me feel calm and relaxable.

✓ That makes me very shy, you know, and only one person can make me feel calm and relaxed.

“let me feel”用词不当，应该用“make me feel”。“relaxable”应改为“relaxed”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because there is a real life right and social media I'm not sure the person is a real person and the in the virtual environment I think there are many dangerous factor so I.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is real life, and on social media I'm not sure if the person is real. In the virtual environment, I think there are many dangerous factors, so I...

“there is a real life right”表达不清，应改为“it is real life”。“and social media”前应加介词“on”。“the in the virtual environment”多余冠词，应去掉“the”。“dangerous factor”应为复数“dangerous factors”。

× Yeah, that is a normal thing. Sometimes I argue with my friend because the different opinion such as where to have fun, where to go, where to go shopping.

✓ Yeah, that is a normal thing. Sometimes I argue with my friend because of different opinions such as where to have fun, where to go, where to go shopping.

“the different opinion”中“opinion”应为复数“opinions”，且前面不需要定冠词“the”。应加介词“because of”表示原因。