Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且部分表达不够自然。建议注意主谓一致（如"everyone are"应为"everyone is"），避免重复表达（"I want to see their face, I want to feel their emotional impersonally"），并使用更准确的词汇（"impersonally"应为"in person"）。此外，句子结构可以更简洁，避免冗长。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends. I prefer face-to-face conversations because I can see their expressions and understand their emotions better. Online chats often make it hard to truly feel what others are saying.

提案: 回答内容较为杂乱，缺乏条理。建议回答时先给出主题句，然后用连词组织具体内容，避免重复和不必要的停顿。词汇使用应更准确，如"classmate or workmate"可以用"classmates or colleagues"。

例: I usually chat with my friends about our career plans, future goals, past experiences, and sometimes about our classmates, colleagues, or family members. We talk about a variety of topics without focusing on just one.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，如"they're thinking mind are totally different"应为"their ways of thinking are different"。建议简化句子结构，避免重复（"I can get, I can get more information"），并使用恰当的连接词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people because more people bring diverse ideas and perspectives. This way, I can learn more and broaden my understanding.

提案: 回答重复且表达混乱，影响理解。建议避免重复回答，直接给出清晰的观点。注意词汇准确性，如"impersonally"应为"in person"，"truly feeling"应为"true feelings"。句子应简洁明了。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to understand people's true feelings better. Social media messages often lack emotional depth and can be misunderstood.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整，且有些句子不通顺。建议使用完整句子，明确表达观点，避免模糊和不连贯的句子。可以适当解释原因并用连接词连接句子。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends because they want emotional support, but I tend to focus on finding solutions. This difference in expectations can cause misunderstandings between us.

× I think everyone are like chatting with friends.

✓ I think everyone likes chatting with friends.

everyone 是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 likes。

× I didn't like the chatting with friends online.

✓ I didn't like chatting with friends online.

the chatting 是不必要的冠词，chatting 作为动名词不需要冠词。

× I want to feel their emotional impersonally.

✓ I want to feel their emotions personally.

emotional 是形容词，需用名词 emotions；impersonally 意为“非个人地”，应为 personally 表示“亲自地”。

× But in Internet we always confuse each other's truly feel.

✓ But on the Internet we always confuse each other's true feelings.

Internet 前应加介词 on；truly 是副词，应使用形容词 true；feel 应为复数 feelings。

× our past experience and our classmate or workmate or our parents.

✓ our past experiences and our classmates or workmates or our parents.

experience, classmate, workmate 应使用复数形式以匹配上下文。

× There's not just a certain, uh, title issue about what WeChat.

✓ There isn't just a certain, uh, topic about WeChat.

title 用法不当，应使用 topic 表示“话题”；there's 应为 there isn't 以否定句表达。

× I think the more people brings more new ideas and they're thinking mind are totally different, their mindset are totally different.

✓ I think the more people bring more new ideas and their thinking minds are totally different, their mindsets are totally different.

people 是复数，谓语动词应用复数 bring；thinking mind 和 mindset 应用复数 minds 和 mindsets。

× So there if there is more people then I can get, I can get more information and I can prove more.

✓ So if there are more people then I can get more information and I can improve more.

there is 应改为 there are 以匹配复数 people；prove 用法错误，应为 improve 表示“提高”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because I want to feel the uh, people's emotional impersonally in the social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because I want to feel people's emotions personally on social media.

介词 in the social media 应为 on social media；emotional 应为名词 emotions；impersonally 应为 personally。

× We also just just send some pics, just send some, uh, Internet sentence.

✓ We also just send some pictures, just send some, uh, internet sentences.

pics 应写全为 pictures；sentence 应用复数 sentences。

× We can't just feel our truly feeling.

✓ We can't really feel our true feelings.

truly 是副词，修饰 feeling 不合适，应使用形容词 true；feeling 应为复数 feelings。

× I have the conflict with my friend just because they always talk about their emotional issue and I always focus on the solution.

✓ I have conflicts with my friends just because they always talk about their emotional issues and I always focus on the solution.

conflict 和 friend 应用复数形式 conflicts 和 friends；issue 应用复数 issues。

× But for them they only need some emotional value.

✓ But for them, they only need some emotional support.

emotional value 用法不当，应使用 emotional support 表达“情感支持”。

× So that's what I can't give them.

✓ So that's something I can't give them.

句子结构不完整，添加 something 使句子完整通顺。

× And I always think there are selfish and they think.

✓ And I always think they are selfish, and they think differently.

原句缺少谓语和宾语，补充完整使句子通顺。