Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm, but it lacks clarity and contains some unclear phrases. Try to use clear and natural expressions, avoid redundancy, and keep your answer concise within 5 sentences. For example, explain how chatting helps you relax and feel happy in a straightforward way.

例: Yes, I love chatting with friends because it helps me relax and forget about stress. Talking to them makes me feel happy and energised, which improves my mood significantly.

提案: Your answer covers relevant topics but is somewhat repetitive and lacks linking words. Try to organise your ideas clearly using linking words like 'for example' or 'also', and avoid repeating words. Be specific about the topics you discuss.

例: We usually chat about funny or unusual news stories. For example, we talk about the latest fashion trends and share interesting information we find online.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because we can have deeper conversations. This helps us understand each other better and build a closer friendship.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your preference clearly and explain why you prefer face-to-face communication using simple and correct sentences. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because I can see my friend's expressions and feel more connected. It makes me feel happier and strengthens our relationship.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be clearer and more organised. Use linking words to explain the process of arguing and resolving conflicts. Also, avoid filler words and improve sentence structure.

例: Yes, we sometimes argue when we have different opinions. However, we quickly resolve our disagreements by understanding each other's views and apologising if necessary.

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because umm, we can deep conservation, umm, to know more about others.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because umm, we can have deep conversations, umm, to know more about others.

The word 'friends' is plural but should be singular 'friend' to match 'only one'. Also, 'deep conservation' is incorrect; it should be 'deep conversations' to convey meaningful talks.

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because umm, we can deep conservation, umm, to know more about others.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because umm, we can have deep conversations, umm, to know more about others.

The phrase 'deep conservation' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'conversations'. Also, 'can deep conservation' is ungrammatical; it should be 'can have deep conversations' to express the ability to engage in talks.

× I prefer to face to face, umm, to commu communicate because I can face to my friend.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friend.

The phrase 'prefer to face to face' is incorrect; 'prefer face-to-face communication' is correct. Also, 'commu communicate' is a repetition error and 'face to my friend' is incorrect; it should be 'see my friend' or 'communicate face-to-face with my friend'.

× I prefer to face to face, umm, to commu communicate because I can face to my friend.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I can see my friend.

The phrase 'face to my friend' is incorrect pronoun usage; 'see my friend' is appropriate here to express direct interaction.

× I will feel this surreal and that's let me feel better and I'm glad to see my friend and we can close.

✓ I will feel this surreal and that lets me feel better. I'm glad to see my friend and we can be close.

'That's let me' is incorrect; it should be 'that lets me' to agree with singular subject. Also, 'we can close' is incorrect; 'we can be close' correctly expresses emotional closeness.

× We will chat with some topics about the umm, funny and some crazy news in the news and what's the fashion, what's the trend and yeah, we are sharing some some information.

✓ We will chat about some topics like funny and crazy news, fashion, trends, and yeah, we share some information.

'Chat with some topics' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'chat about some topics'. Also, 'news' is uncountable and should not be pluralized as 'news in the news'. 'What's the fashion' should be 'fashion' and 'what's the trend' should be 'trends' for natural expression.

× Yeah, absolutely. Yes, umm, we will argue some different points in the question or some issue, umm, but we have umm fast to solve the problem and we can understand others and we can apologize to others.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. Yes, umm, we will argue different points about the question or some issues, umm, but we quickly solve the problem and we can understand others and apologize to them.

The phrase 'argue some different points in the question' is incorrect; it should be 'argue different points about the question'. Also, 'have umm fast to solve' is ungrammatical; 'quickly solve' is correct. 'Apologize to others' is fine but 'apologize to them' is more natural here.