Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Avoid repetition like "no no chatting" and use clearer sentence structures. For example, start with a direct answer, then add specific details using linking words to improve coherence.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends. We often create different groups and chat all night. It's one of my favorite hobbies because we discuss various topics and joke around, which makes our conversations fun and engaging.

提案: Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details. Also, use correct vocabulary like "stuff" instead of "stuffs."

例: We usually chat about our relationships, teachers, daily activities, and studies. For instance, we often share experiences from school and help each other with homework.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more natural by avoiding awkward phrases like "I'm a slight type of person." Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

例: To be honest, I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because I'm an introvert. I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts in a one-on-one conversation since I find it difficult to open up in larger groups.

提案: Improve fluency by avoiding fillers like "uh" and clarify your points. Use linking words to organize your answer and choose more appropriate vocabulary, such as "share my thoughts" instead of "share my stuff."

例: I prefer communicating via social media because I don't feel pressured to make eye contact. Additionally, it's easier to share my thoughts, and our conversations remain private.

提案: Your answer is quite good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and smoother linking phrases. Also, avoid informal expressions like "got little bit spiced up."

例: To be honest, we rarely argue, but sometimes disagreements happen. For example, once we had different opinions about our Navratri plans, which led to a small argument.

× Yes, no no chatting with friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with friends.

The original sentence is unclear and lacks a proper quantifier or verb to express liking. Adding 'I like' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× We often make different alpha groups and we chat for all night and chatting with my friends is one of my best hobbies because we talk about different stuff and we joke around with each other.

✓ We often make different alpha groups and chat all night. Chatting with my friends is one of my best hobbies because we talk about different stuff and joke around with each other.

The phrase 'chat for all night' is incorrect; 'chat all night' is the correct expression. Also, 'chatting' is correctly used as a gerund in the second sentence. Removing redundant 'we' before 'chat' and 'joke' improves sentence flow.

× We usually talk about our relationship with each other and also talk about our teachers and about our daily stuffs and we also discuss about our studies and we also study.

✓ We usually talk about our relationships with each other, our teachers, and our daily stuff. We also discuss our studies and study together.

The word 'stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable and does not have a plural form. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. Correcting these prepositions and plural forms improves grammatical accuracy.

× We usually talk about our relationship with each other and also talk about our teachers and about our daily stuffs and we also discuss about our studies and we also study.

✓ We usually talk about our relationships with each other and also talk about our teachers and our daily stuff. We also discuss our studies and study together.

The word 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' to match 'each other' implying multiple relationships. Also, 'stuffs' is incorrect; 'stuff' is uncountable and should remain singular.

× We also discuss about our studies and we also study.

✓ We also discuss our studies and study.

'Discuss' is a transitive verb and does not require the preposition 'about'. Removing 'about' corrects the sentence.

× I'm an introvert and I would only talk with my friends instead of a group of people because I'm a slight type of person and I don't have enough courage to talk about myself with a group of people.

✓ I'm an introvert and I would only talk with my friends instead of a group of people because I'm a shy type of person and I don't have enough courage to talk about myself with a group of people.

The word 'slight' is incorrectly used to describe personality; the correct adjective is 'shy'. This correction improves clarity and appropriateness of the description.

× I prefer communication by social media because I don't have a burden to make an eye contact with, uh, another person.

✓ I prefer communicating via social media because I don't have the burden of making eye contact with another person.

The phrase 'communication by social media' is better expressed as 'communicating via social media'. Also, 'have a burden to make an eye contact with' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'have the burden of making eye contact with'.

× And I can also I can also share my stuff easily and also our conversation cannot be so much popular.

✓ I can also share my stuff easily, and our conversation cannot become very popular.

The phrase 'cannot be so much popular' is incorrect; 'cannot become very popular' is more appropriate. Also, removing the repeated 'I can also' improves sentence clarity.

× Well to be honest we don't argue much but sometimes when things got little bit spiced up we do argue.

✓ Well, to be honest, we don't argue much, but sometimes when things get a little bit spiced up, we do argue.

The verb 'got' should be in present tense 'get' to match the present tense context of 'sometimes'. Also, adding commas improves readability.

× Like we were discussing about our Navratri plans and we didn't match our feelings and we argued.

✓ We were discussing our Navratri plans, but our feelings didn't match, and we argued.

'Discussing about' is incorrect; 'discussing' does not require 'about'. Also, 'didn't match our feelings' is better expressed as 'our feelings didn't match' for clarity.