Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and be more concise. Also, correct grammar errors such as 'whose name is Stella' to 'whose name is Stella' or 'named Stella'. Provide a more complete answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details without redundancy.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend named Stella. We talk almost every day about our daily activities and share our thoughts.

提案: Good use of examples and clear topic sentence. To improve, try to use linking words to connect ideas more smoothly and add a bit more specific detail to enrich the answer.

例: I usually chat with my best friend about our daily lives, such as school, work, or hobbies. For instance, we often share updates about movies we've watched and discuss places we'd like to visit in the future.

提案: Your answer is clear and well-structured with good vocabulary. To improve, you could add a linking phrase and a specific example to support your opinion.

例: Speaking for myself, I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because conversations tend to be more meaningful. For example, I can focus better and share personal thoughts more openly.

提案: Avoid filler phrases like 'you know' and improve sentence fluency. Use linking words to connect ideas and be more concise. Also, correct awkward phrasing such as 'I prefer more to connect face to face' to 'I prefer to connect face-to-face'.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction. Moreover, I can read facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand the other person better.

提案: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and has some grammar issues. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating 'try'. Also, use correct pronouns and clearer phrasing.

例: Not really. I usually avoid misunderstandings and arguments with my best friend because I value our relationship and believe arguing is unproductive.

× Yes, I do enjoy chatting with my friends, especially, uh, with my best friends whose name is Stella.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy chatting with my friends, especially, uh, with my best friend whose name is Stella.

The phrase 'best friends whose name is Stella' is incorrect because 'friends' is plural but 'name' is singular. Since Stella refers to one person, 'best friend' should be singular to match the singular 'name'.

× I can say that we almost chat with each other almost every day.

✓ I can say that we chat with each other almost every day.

The word 'almost' is repeated unnecessarily. Removing the first 'almost' improves clarity and correctness.

× I prefer more to connect face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective, you know, interaction.

✓ I prefer to connect face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective, you know, interaction.

The phrase 'prefer more to connect' is incorrect. The correct structure is 'prefer to connect'. The word 'more' is unnecessary and disrupts the sentence flow.

× I realise how I value her, how this person is important for me and there is no use of arguing with them.

✓ I realize how I value her, how this person is important to me and there is no use in arguing with her.

The pronouns 'her' and 'them' are inconsistent when referring to the same person. Also, 'important for me' should be 'important to me', and 'no use of arguing' should be 'no use in arguing'. Consistent pronouns and correct prepositions improve clarity.