Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains some grammatical errors. Try to make your response more concise and natural by avoiding repetition and correcting sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, but I prefer talking to them face to face rather than online because it feels more personal and engaging.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains hesitations and grammatical mistakes. Try to be more specific and organized in your response. Avoid generalizations and filler words, and provide clear examples of topics you discuss.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our children and their school activities, cooking recipes, and household chores, as these are common interests among us.

提案: Your answer has some repetition and filler words. Try to speak more fluently and clearly. Also, use linking words to explain your preference and provide specific reasons.

例: I prefer chatting with a group, especially my family, because it allows me to catch up on everyone's week and share enjoyable experiences together.

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit short and contains filler words. Try to expand your response with more details and avoid unnecessary fillers to sound more confident.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication with my family and friends because seeing their facial expressions helps me understand their feelings better and makes the conversation more meaningful.

× Yes, I'd like chatting with friends, but if you mean chatting, you mean online.

✓ Yes, I'd like to chat with friends, but if you mean chatting online,

The phrase 'I'd like' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'to chat' rather than the gerund 'chatting'. Using 'to chat' is grammatically correct after 'would like'. Also, the sentence structure is improved by combining the clauses more clearly.

× I I prefer to speak with them face to face.

✓ I prefer to speak with them face to face.

The repetition of 'I' is a mistake. Removing the extra 'I' corrects the sentence.

× I it's better to meet them and speak them face to face.

✓ I think it's better to meet them and speak to them face to face.

The phrase 'I it's better' is incorrect; it should be 'I think it's better'. Also, 'speak them' is incorrect; the correct form is 'speak to them' because 'speak' requires the preposition 'to' when referring to people.

× You know, women speak about any subject and we as a woman speak about all of the subjects specially, umm, are the are, are children and their school, cooking, uh, houseworking, anything related to a housewife.

✓ You know, women speak about any subject and we as women speak about all of the subjects, especially children and their school, cooking, housework, anything related to a housewife.

The phrase 'we as a woman' is incorrect because 'we' is plural and 'a woman' is singular; it should be 'we as women'. Also, 'houseworking' is not a correct noun; the correct term is 'housework'. The repeated words 'are the are, are' are removed for clarity.

× Uh, you can, uh, learn about what happened in there during the week and you can have some good experiences.

✓ Uh, you can learn about what happened there during the week and you can have some good experiences.

The preposition 'in' before 'there' is unnecessary and incorrect in this context. 'Happened there' is the correct phrase.