Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural by using correct grammar and avoiding redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep your answer within 5 sentences. For example, explain why chatting makes you happy and give specific reasons.

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they always make me feel happy and supported. They are friendly and proud of my achievements. Also, they help me whenever I have problems. I usually chat with them late at night because it helps me relax.

提案: Make your answer more complete and clear by finishing your sentences and using linking words. Be specific about the topics you discuss and avoid vague phrases. Keep your answer concise and structured.

例: Since I am a student, we usually chat about exams and study stress. We also talk about how we spend our free time. Sometimes, I ask my friends for advice on managing schoolwork.

提案: Try to organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to show contrast or preference. Be specific about when you prefer chatting alone or in a group.

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes, I prefer chatting with my best friend because we can talk about anything. Other times, I enjoy chatting with a group of friends, especially when we share common interests like studying or going out.

提案: Improve your answer by using clearer expressions and linking words. Explain why face-to-face communication is emotional and give a specific example. Keep your answer concise and natural.

例: I usually prefer face-to-face communication because it feels more emotional and personal. For example, meeting friends in person creates special memories. However, social media is also useful when we cannot meet.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more relevant by focusing on your own experience. Use correct grammar and avoid confusing phrases. Explain why you argue and give a specific example.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially when we cannot decide where to go, like choosing between a cafe or a park. These small disagreements happen because everyone has different preferences.

× Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they make my sense, happy and they made my day.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they make me feel happy and they make my day.

The phrase 'make my sense, happy' is incorrect; it should be 'make me feel happy' to express the emotion properly. Also, 'they made my day' should be in present tense 'they make my day' to match the ongoing action.

× I love them because they are cool and friendly and they always proud of me and they help me if I think so.

✓ I love them because they are cool and friendly, and they are always proud of me and help me if I need it.

The phrase 'they always proud of me' lacks the verb 'are' for correct sentence structure. Also, 'help me if I think so' is unclear; it should be 'help me if I need it' to convey the intended meaning.

× Yes I wish I think anytime in midnight.

✓ Yes, I think about them anytime at midnight.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'I wish I think anytime in midnight' does not make sense. The corrected sentence clarifies the intended meaning with proper structure and preposition.

× Yeah, I'm still a student, so almost the shot is about studying an exam, you know, stress all these thing of students that feel and asking about their time.

✓ Yeah, I'm still a student, so almost all the talk is about studying and exams, you know, the stress and all these things that students feel and ask about their time.

The phrase 'almost the shot' is incorrect; it should be 'almost all the talk'. Also, 'stress all these thing' should be 'the stress and all these things' for correct quantification and plural form.

× Sometimes I ask them about.

✓ Sometimes I ask them about their studies or other things.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks an object after 'ask them about'. The correction completes the sentence to make it meaningful.

× I think it depends sometime I really like chat with my or my best friend about all or I don't know anything in the world but a friends a group of friends our like interest is just in the study and go out.

✓ I think it depends. Sometimes I really like to chat with my best friend about everything, or with a group of friends whose interests are just studying and going out.

The original sentence is confusing and has quantifier errors like 'about all' and 'a friends a group of friends'. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects quantifier usage.

× Usually I prefer face to face because it's really emotional and it's cute that you meet your friends that next time that maybe you will never meet them.

✓ Usually I prefer face-to-face communication because it's really emotional and it's nice to meet your friends, especially since next time you may never meet them.

The phrase 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective. Also, the sentence structure is improved for clarity and correct preposition use.

× But sometimes social media is also good.

✓ But sometimes, social media is also good.

Added a comma after 'sometimes' for better sentence flow; no major pronoun error here but punctuation improves clarity.

× I think old people argue so yes, absolutely we argue a lot of time, especially when we we want to go players or coffee.

✓ I think all people argue, so yes, absolutely we argue a lot of times, especially when we want to go to places or for coffee.

'Old people' is likely a mishearing or misuse; 'all people' fits better. 'A lot of time' should be 'a lot of times' to indicate frequency. 'Go players' is unclear; corrected to 'go to places'.

× We never decide what is the place.

✓ We never decide on the place.

The original sentence is awkward; 'decide on the place' is the correct phrase.

× We said this one friend say I want to visit this village and like this you understand I don't understand in the point that the doctor.

✓ One friend says, 'I want to visit this village,' and like this, you understand? I don't understand the point that the other said.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The correction restructures it for clarity and proper tense and pronoun use.