Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和用词不当，例如“bring a lot of quietness”应改为“bring me a sense of calm”，以及“bruise our relationship”应为“strengthen our relationship”。建议使用更自然的表达，并减少语气词如“umm”和“uh”。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel calm, relieves stress, and strengthens our relationship.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“need to chat about with my friends about”重复且不自然，且“check some gossip in”表达不准确。建议简洁明了地表达聊天内容，避免重复和语气词。

例: I usually talk with my friends about beautiful clothes, interesting events in our daily lives, and sometimes we share some gossip.

提案: 回答不连贯且含有错误，如“33 best friends like like a girl”不明确，“iPhone to chat”语法错误。建议直接表达偏好，并用完整句子说明原因。

例: I prefer chatting with a small group of close friends because it's more lively, but sometimes I like talking one-on-one for deeper conversations.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但有语法错误，如“listening them to more clearly”应为“listen to them more clearly”。建议注意语法准确性，并使用更自然的表达。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can express my ideas clearly and listen to others better. However, when I'm busy, I use social media to stay in touch.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如“high high school”，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地说明过去和现在的情况，并避免重复。

例: To be honest, I don't argue with my friends often now, but when I was in junior and high school, I argued more because we were young and learning to understand each other.

× Yes, I like to chat with my friends because it can bring a lot of quietness to me and, umm, release a little pressure and even, uh, bruise our relationship more closely.

✓ Yes, I like to chat with my friends because it can bring a lot of quietness to me and, umm, release a little pressure and even, uh, bring our relationship closer.

这里“bruise our relationship more closely”中的“bruise”用错了，应该用“bring”表示“使关系更亲密”。另外，“more closely”应改为“closer”，因为“closer”是形容词，修饰“relationship”。这是单复数和词语搭配的问题。

× Well, uh, I actually need to chat about with my friends about some beautiful, uh, clothes and some interesting, uh, things that happen in our daily life, but we also to check some, uh, gossip in.

✓ Well, uh, I actually need to chat with my friends about some beautiful, uh, clothes and some interesting, uh, things that happen in our daily life, but we also check some, uh, gossip.

“chat about with”中“about”多余，应去掉；“we also to check”中“to”不应出现，正确用法是“we also check”。这是动词+ing形式和句子结构错误。

× Actually I prefer with my 33 best friends like like a girl but sometimes iPhone to chat with 1 friend.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with my 33 best friends like a girl, but sometimes I prefer to chat with one friend.

“prefer with”应改为“prefer to chat with”；“iPhone”显然是误写，应为“I prefer”；数字“1”应写为“one”。这是单复数和句子结构错误。

× Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can clearly express my ideas and listening them to more clearly. But when I'm a little busy, I like to communicate on the social media.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can clearly express my ideas and listen to them more clearly. But when I'm a little busy, I like to communicate on social media.

“listening them to”应改为“listen to them”；“on the social media”中“the”不应出现，应为“on social media”。这是介词和动词形式错误。

× To be honest with you now, I don't often argue with my friends, but in my junior or high high school, I often argue with them because, you know, like the student. As a student, I always teach other people with them.

✓ To be honest with you now, I don't often argue with my friends, but in my junior or high school, I often argued with them because, you know, as a student, I always taught other people with them.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时态，如“argue”改为“argued”，“teach”改为“taught”。另外，“high high school”重复，应改为“high school”。这是过去时态和句子结构错误。