Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

× Yes, I like to chat with my friends because it can bring a lot of quietness to me and, umm, release a little pressure and even, uh, bruise our relationship more closely.

✓ Yes, I like to chat with my friends because it can bring a lot of quietness to me and, umm, release a little pressure and even, uh, bring our relationship closer.

这里的“bruise”用错了，正确的词是“bring”，表示“使我们的关系更亲密”。“bruise”是“擦伤”的意思，不符合语境。

× Well, uh, I actually need to chat about with my friends about some beautiful, uh, clothes and some interesting, uh, things that happen in our daily life, but we also to check some, uh, gossip in.

✓ Well, uh, I actually need to chat with my friends about some beautiful, uh, clothes and some interesting, uh, things that happen in our daily life, but we also check some, uh, gossip.

“chat about with”结构重复，应去掉“about”或“with”中的一个。句尾“check some gossip in”中“in”多余，应去掉。

× Actually I prefer with my 33 best friends like like a girl but sometimes iPhone to chat with 1 friend.

✓ Actually, I prefer to chat with my 33 best friends like a girl, but sometimes I phone to chat with one friend.

“prefer with”应改为“prefer to chat with”；数字“1”应写为“one”；“iPhone”应为“I phone”表示“我打电话”。

× Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can clearly express my ideas and listening them to more clearly. But when I'm a little busy, I like to communicate on the social media.

✓ Actually, I prefer to communicate face to face because I can clearly express my ideas and listen to them more clearly. But when I'm a little busy, I like to communicate on social media.

“listening them to”结构错误，应为“listen to them”；“the social media”中“the”不需要，改为“on social media”。

× To be honest with you now, I don't often argue with my friends, but in my junior or high high school, I often argue with them because, you know, like the student. As a student, I always teach other people with them.

✓ To be honest with you now, I don't often argue with my friends, but in my junior or high school, I often argued with them because, you know, as a student, I always disagreed with other people.

描述过去的事情时，动词应使用过去时“argued”；“teach other people with them”表达不清，应改为“disagreed with other people”，更符合语境。