Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız doğal ve anlamlı, ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve bazı ifadelerin daha akıcı olması gerekiyor. "create" yerine "creates" kullanmalısınız ve cümleleri daha kısa ve net yapmalısınız.

例: I love chatting with my friends because these moments are very meaningful to me. We often talk about inspiring topics that motivate me to achieve more in life. I believe these conversations create memories that I will cherish forever.

提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve belirsiz ifadeler var. Daha net ve akıcı cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, konuyu daha spesifik detaylarla destekleyebilirsiniz.

例: We usually chat about our daily routines. For example, my best friend Aaron often tells me what he is doing during the day. We don't always meet face to face; sometimes we text each other.

提案: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha akıcı ve doğru cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, nedenlerini daha açık ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: I prefer chatting with only one close friend because it feels more intimate. In a group, you can't always say what's on your mind because you have to filter your thoughts. But with one person, you can speak more freely.

提案: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi hataları ve eksik cümleler var. Daha düzgün ve tamamlanmış cümleler kurmalısınız. Ayrıca, nedenlerinizi daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla ifade edin.

例: I prefer communicating via social media because it is more convenient and frequent. Meeting face-to-face requires planning and traveling, which can be time-consuming. Social media allows instant communication without these difficulties.

提案: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve ifadelerde akıcılık eksikliği var. "discuss about" yerine "discuss" kullanmalısınız ve cümleleri daha doğal yapmalısınız.

例: Yes, I do argue with my friends, especially with Aaron. He is always late when we meet, so we often discuss this issue. I expect him to change, but he never does, so I just have to accept it.

× I believe this conversation create memories that I will cherish forever.

✓ I believe this conversation creates memories that I will cherish forever.

The subject 'conversation' is singular, so the verb should be in the third person singular form 'creates' instead of 'create'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× We do chat about, umm, our daily routines.

✓ We do chat about, umm, our daily routines.

Although the sentence is grammatically correct, the phrase 'do chat' is unusual in affirmative sentences and can be simplified to 'We chat about, umm, our daily routines.' However, since it is not a grammar problem type listed, no correction is made.

× We're sometimes typing, texting each other.

✓ We're sometimes typing and texting each other.

The sentence lacks a conjunction between 'typing' and 'texting'. Using 'and' correctly connects the two actions. This is an incorrect conjunction use, but since only prepositions are listed, this is the closest applicable correction.

× When you do chats with a group of people you you cannot always say what is on your mind all the time.

✓ When you chat with a group of people you cannot always say what is on your mind all the time.

The verb 'do chats' is incorrect; 'chat' should be used without 'do' in this context. Also, 'you you' is a repetition error but not a grammar problem type listed. The main issue is subject-verb agreement and verb usage.

× I do prefer communicate via social media because you can do it very often.

✓ I do prefer to communicate via social media because you can do it very often.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the infinitive form 'to communicate'. This is a verb form error related to modal verb usage.

× To meet and communicate with a person face to face, you have to umm, prepare a plan and obey it.

✓ To meet and communicate with a person face to face, you have to, umm, make a plan and follow it.

The verb 'obey' is incorrectly used with 'plan'. The correct verb is 'follow' when referring to plans. This is an incorrect use of verbs and prepositions.

× He's always late when we're meeting up, so we always discuss about that matter and I'm expecting him to correct himself, but he does never do that and I just have to deal with that situation.

✓ He's always late when we're meeting up, so we always discuss that matter and I'm expecting him to correct himself, but he never does that and I just have to deal with that situation.

The adverb 'never' should be placed before the main verb 'does' in negative sentences. Also, 'discuss about' is incorrect; 'discuss' does not require 'about'. These are errors in adverb placement and preposition use.