Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达情感。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we share our daily experiences and understand each other well. This close connection makes me feel very warm and supported.

提案: 回答内容较为简单，建议增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节描述，提高表达的自然度和准确性。

例: I usually chat about various topics such as studies, food, and our feelings. Especially when I feel upset, I prefer to talk with a close friend because it helps me feel better.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免重复，并且用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer chatting one-on-one with a friend because it feels more personal and honest. When I talk to her, I don't hesitate to share my thoughts, which makes me feel very comfortable.

提案: 回答较好，但有语法错误和表达不够自然，建议调整句子结构，使用更地道的表达方式。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to see facial expressions and body language, which social media cannot provide. This makes the interaction more effective and personal.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和重复，建议简化表达，使用正确的语法，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, which is quite common. However, if we handle arguments properly, it can actually strengthen our relationship.

× I love chatting with friends for example.

✓ I love chatting with friends, for example.

这里需要在 'friends' 和 'for example' 之间加逗号，表示插入语，语法上更通顺。

× We always talk anything around our life and we can feel each other, understand each other.

✓ We always talk about anything around our life and we can feel each other, understand each other.

动词 'talk' 后面需要加介词 'about' 来引出谈论的内容。

× I think it is a kind of hard connection between us to that can make me feel very warm.

✓ I think it is a kind of strong connection between us that can make me feel very warm.

原句结构混乱，'to that' 不合适，改为 'that' 引导定语从句，且 'hard connection' 应改为 'strong connection' 更符合表达。

× I usually talk with my friends about study, food and our mood.

✓ I usually talk with my friends about studies, food and our mood.

'study' 作为名词时应使用复数 'studies' 表示学习的各个方面。

× Especially when I feel upset I prefer to talk with her then I will be feel better.

✓ Especially when I feel upset, I prefer to talk with her then I will feel better.

'will be feel' 是错误的，'feel' 是动词原形，'will' 后直接加动词原形。

× I like this mood that one person to one person I think is very good and we we don't have any secret.

✓ I like this mood of one person to one person. I think it is very good and we don't have any secrets.

'mood that one person to one person' 结构不正确，改为 'mood of one person to one person'；'secret' 应用复数 'secrets'。

× And when I talk with her I didn't have any hesitation.

✓ And when I talk with her I don't have any hesitation.

句子时态应与上下文一致，描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，'didn't have' 改为 'don't have'。

× So this mood make me feel very warm.

✓ So this mood makes me feel very warm.

主语是单数 'mood'，谓语动词应加第三人称单数形式 'makes'。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to observe facial expressions and body language, which are the social media can't give us.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows me to observe facial expressions and body language, which social media can't give us.

'the social media' 中 'social media' 不需要定冠词 'the'。

× And I think this makes communication more effective and personal and it is a hard connection.

✓ And I think this makes communication more effective and personal, and it is a strong connection.

'hard connection' 用词不当，应改为 'strong connection' 表达更准确。

× Yes, I'd argue with friends, I think this is very common things, but uh, we, we just should know how to deal with it them.

✓ Yes, I'd argue with friends, I think these are very common things, but uh, we just should know how to deal with them.

'this is very common things' 主谓不一致，'things' 是复数，主语应改为复数 'these are'；'deal with it them' 多余 'it'，应去掉。

× And if you do with argument clearly, then it can make your uh connection more stronger.

✓ And if you deal with arguments clearly, then it can make your connection stronger.

'do with argument' 用法错误，应为 'deal with arguments'；'more stronger' 是比较级重复，应改为 'stronger'。