Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details about how and why you like chatting with friends. Use simple and correct sentence structures.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends a lot. I usually use Instagram and WhatsApp to share our experiences and thoughts, which helps us stay connected even when we are apart.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not directly address the question. Focus on giving a clear topic sentence and then add specific examples of topics you discuss with friends. Avoid unrelated or confusing phrases.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, hobbies, and recent events. For example, we often talk about movies we have watched or plans for the weekend.

提案: Your answer repeats words and has grammatical mistakes. Try to give a clear preference and explain why, using correct grammar and linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: I prefer to chat with only one friend because it is easier to share my personal experiences and have a deeper conversation. Also, chatting one-on-one feels more comfortable for me.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and contains errors. Give a clear preference and explain your reasons with specific details. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I mostly prefer to communicate via social media because it allows me to stay updated with new trends and connect with many people easily. However, I also value face-to-face communication for more personal interactions.

提案: Your answer has many hesitations and unclear phrases. Try to speak more fluently and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Avoid filler words and be specific about the arguments.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, usually about small things like movies or favorite actors. For example, recently I had a friendly argument about who is the best actor in Tollywood.

× Yes, I really love Chandigarh friends because if you can share our experiences, our thoughts and everything in the chat, I can.

✓ Yes, I really love chatting with friends from Chandigarh because we can share our experiences, our thoughts, and everything in the chat.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Chandigarh friends' and mixes pronouns 'you' and 'our' confusingly. The correction clarifies the subject and uses consistent pronouns to express the idea clearly.

× Mostly I can chat in the Instagram or WhatsApp.

✓ Mostly, I chat on Instagram or WhatsApp.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect when referring to social media platforms; the correct preposition is 'on'. Also, 'can chat' is changed to 'chat' to better fit the habitual action.

× Ilse Chant of Ayodhya victims of ending chagrams are watching shared our experience. What happens in a daily life? Yes.

✓ I usually chat about daily life and share our experiences.

The original sentence is unclear and contains unrelated or incorrect phrases. The correction simplifies and clarifies the intended meaning to fit the question context.

× I prefer to prefer to chat with only one people because I have to share my experiences and everything into one person.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one person because I want to share my experiences and everything with one person.

'People' is plural, but the sentence refers to a single individual, so 'person' is correct. Also, 'prefer to prefer to' is redundant and corrected.

× So I would like to chat with one people.

✓ So I would like to chat with one person.

Again, 'people' is plural and incorrect here; 'person' is the correct singular noun.

× Mostly I prefer to compete with social media because we have we are eligible to meet new trends in the social media and.

✓ Mostly, I prefer to communicate via social media because we can keep up with new trends on social media.

'Compete with social media' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'communicate via social media'. Also, 'eligible to meet' is incorrect; 'keep up with' or 'follow' is appropriate. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I argue with friends and in some situations like that uh, rather details on movies uh, favorite actors, uh, like that who have a little time friends, uh, for instance, uh, uh, recently I have fought with my friend who, who is the best actor in the Tollywood.

✓ Yes, I argue with friends sometimes, for example, about movies or favorite actors. Recently, I had a fight with my friend about who is the best actor in Tollywood.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and grammatical correctness, using past tense 'had a fight' to indicate a completed action.