Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强基本句型的练习，避免重复和无意义的词汇。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达自己的感受和原因。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share interesting stories with them.

提案: 回答内容不完整且语法错误较多，建议学习如何描述过去发生的事情，并使用正确的时态和句子结构。

例: I usually talk about what happened during our day and what I did yesterday.

提案: 回答中词汇使用错误且句子结构混乱，建议学习表达偏好时的常用句型，并注意单复数和词汇的正确使用。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because talking in a group makes me feel tired, but one-on-one conversations are more relaxing.

提案: 回答表达不清且有语法错误，建议学习如何表达偏好和原因，注意词汇的准确使用。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I find it hard to express my feelings clearly on social media.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，建议练习完整句子的表达，学习如何描述发生的情况。

例: Sometimes we argue when we have different opinions, but we usually resolve our disagreements quickly.

× Chapter with my friend make me feel relaxing and I can share my interesting friends with my friend.

✓ Chatting with my friend makes me feel relaxed and I can share interesting things with my friend.

原句中“Chapter”应为“Chatting”，且“make”应与单数主语“my friend”保持一致，改为“makes”。“relaxing”应改为形容词“relaxed”来表达感受。句中“interesting friends”应为“interesting things”，因为分享的是有趣的事情而非朋友。

× This can be caused to with my friends.

✓ This can be caused by my friends.

“caused to with”搭配错误，正确表达应为“caused by”，表示“由……引起”。

× I usually talk what happened in our dead and what we I do yesterday.

✓ I usually talk about what happened in our day and what I did yesterday.

“talk”后应接介词“about”引出话题。原句“dead”应为“day”，且“we I do”结构混乱，应改为“I did”表示过去发生的事情。

× I purchased with only one friends because I feel cheated with a group of people make me feel tired but trail with on only one frame I feel relaxed.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I feel chatting with a group of people makes me feel tired, but chatting with only one friend makes me feel relaxed.

“purchased”用词错误，应为“prefer to chat”。“friends”应为单数“friend”与“only one”保持一致。句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× I prefer face to face because I failed on social media, I can't express expression my fruits.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because I am not good at social media; I can't express my feelings well.

“failed on social media”表达不当，应为“not good at social media”。“express expression my fruits”语义不明，推测为“express my feelings”。

× Sometimes when we have different advice, we. Will be argue but.

✓ Sometimes when we have different opinions, we will argue.

“different advice”应为“different opinions”。句子断裂且“will be argue”结构错误，应为“will argue”。