Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
I really do like chatting with friends because I fear I'm the psychologist of my friend group and they always ask me about my opinions on everything and I give them my opinions actually and they do what I say and I think they enjoy talking with me as well as I do with them.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
We talked about everything, as I say, everything. It's literally everything, but mostly about their relationships because they always have a problem with one of their boyfriends or girlfriends. So they come up to me and ask me for my advice frequently and I'm willing to give them my opinions and share my opinions with them.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
It depends on the group that I'm talking to, but I usually prefer chatting with only one friend because I feel more comfortable with sharing my thoughts with only one friend and other than that I really enjoy talking to people as well. But like I said, only one friend would be better.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
I prefer face to face because meanwhile COVID, we didn't really have much time to spend time with each other, face to face with people that we care and trust and we can see how it makes people turn out. So I prefer face to face and I like to see the people's impressions and what they actually think about instead of texting.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
I try not to argue with friends because when I care about someone I try to not hurt any of their feelings. But when we're on the opposite side of anything, I begin to protect my own feelings. So that might turn out as arguing with them, but I don't really mean to, so no.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 65.0提案: Cevabınız doğal ancak biraz uzun ve tekrarlayıcı. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kullanarak, düşüncelerinizi daha etkili ifade edebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, 'fear' kelimesi burada uygun değil, 'feel like' daha doğru olur.
例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because they often seek my advice, and I like sharing my opinions with them. It feels rewarding when they appreciate my thoughts and enjoy our conversations.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cevabınızda tekrar eden ifadeler var ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Daha spesifik ve akıcı cümleler kurarak, konuyu daha iyi açıklayabilirsiniz.
例: We usually talk about various topics, but mostly about their relationships since they often face problems with their partners. They frequently ask for my advice, and I’m happy to share my thoughts with them.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 68.0提案: Cevabınızda bazı tekrarlar ve uzun cümleler var. Daha kısa ve net ifadeler kullanarak, düşüncelerinizi daha iyi aktarabilirsiniz.
例: I usually prefer chatting with one friend because I feel more comfortable sharing my thoughts. However, I also enjoy talking to groups sometimes, depending on the people.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 72.0提案: Cevabınızda bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha açık ve doğru cümleler kurarak, fikrinizi daha iyi ifade edebilirsiniz.
例: I prefer face-to-face communication because during COVID, we couldn’t meet often. Seeing people’s expressions helps me understand their true feelings better than texting.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 70.0提案: Cevabınızda fikirleriniz açık ancak cümleler biraz karışık. Daha net ve düzenli cümleler kurarak, düşüncelerinizi daha iyi ifade edebilirsiniz.
例: I try to avoid arguing with friends because I don’t want to hurt their feelings. However, if we disagree, I defend my views, which might seem like an argument, but I don’t intend to fight.
文法
× We talked about everything, as I say, everything.
✓ We talk about everything, as I say, everything.
The question is about usual habits, so the present tense should be used instead of past tense to indicate regular actions.
× So they come up to me and ask me for my advice frequently
✓ So they come to me and ask me for my advice frequently
The phrase 'come up to me' is less appropriate here; 'come to me' is the correct preposition to indicate seeking advice.
× I prefer face to face because meanwhile COVID, we didn't really have much time to spend time with each other, face to face with people that we care and trust and we can see how it makes people turn out.
✓ I prefer face to face because during COVID, we didn't really have much time to spend with each other face to face with people that we care about and trust, and we can see how it makes people turn out.
The preposition 'meanwhile' is incorrect here; 'during' is appropriate to indicate the time period. Also, 'care and trust' should be 'care about and trust' to correctly use the preposition with 'care'.
× I like to see the people's impressions and what they actually think about instead of texting.
✓ I like to see people's impressions and what they actually think about instead of texting.
The definite article 'the' before 'people's impressions' is unnecessary; removing it makes the sentence more natural.
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