Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more fluent and natural by avoiding fillers like 'umm' and improving grammar, such as 'more free time' instead of 'more free times'. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I sometimes enjoy chatting with my friends, especially when I have free time. However, when I am very busy, I tend to avoid conversations. I prefer talking to them in person because it feels more personal.

提案: Focus on using correct vocabulary and grammar, such as 'a variety of topics' instead of 'a varieties of stuff'. Also, avoid incomplete sentences like 'The top.' and provide clear, specific examples.

例: Usually, we talk about a variety of topics, including our personal lives, such as relationships, our work, and sometimes our plans for the future.

提案: Improve grammar by using singular/plural correctly, e.g., 'one friend' instead of 'one friends'. Clarify your ideas and use linking words to explain reasons clearly. Also, correct 'staff' to 'stuff' or 'things'.

例: Personally, I prefer talking to one friend or at most a couple of friends because I usually go into details about my personal matters, and I feel uncomfortable sharing too much in a large group.

提案: Complete your sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a clear reason. For example, explain why face-to-face communication feels more intense.

例: Even though technology has made communication easier, I still prefer face-to-face meetings because I feel a stronger connection and more intense emotions when I meet my friends in person.

提案: Improve grammar by using singular/plural correctly, e.g., 'any relationship' instead of 'any relationships'. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent and avoid redundancy.

例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes, which I believe is normal in any relationship. However, I always make sure that we respect each other during arguments because respect is the most important aspect.

× I would like to chat with my friends in person when I have more free times and I avoid talking to my friends when I have a very busy.

✓ I would like to chat with my friends in person when I have more free time and I avoid talking to my friends when I am very busy.

The word 'times' should be singular 'time' because 'free time' is an uncountable noun. Also, 'a very busy' is incomplete; it should be 'I am very busy' to correctly express the state of being busy.

× I think usually we talk about a varieties of stuff.

✓ I think usually we talk about a variety of stuff.

The phrase 'a varieties' is incorrect because 'varieties' is plural and cannot be used with the singular article 'a'. The correct phrase is 'a variety of'.

× Personally, I prefer to talk to only one friends or no more than a couple of them and this is because when I talk about my staff I usually go in details of what's going on so I will feel uncomfortable.

✓ Personally, I prefer to talk to only one friend or no more than a couple of them because when I talk about my stuff I usually go into details of what's going on so I would feel uncomfortable.

The word 'friends' should be singular 'friend' after 'one'. Also, 'staff' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'stuff'. The phrase 'go in details' should be 'go into details'. The modal verb 'will' is better as 'would' to express hypothetical feelings.

× I usually go in details of what's going on so I will feel uncomfortable.

✓ I usually go into details of what's going on so I would feel uncomfortable.

The correct preposition is 'into' not 'in' when talking about going into details.

× The top.

✓ (Remove this fragment as it is incomplete and unclear.)

'The top.' is an incomplete sentence and does not convey clear meaning; it should be removed for clarity.

× I think an argument is normal for any relationships.

✓ I think an argument is normal for any relationship.

The word 'relationships' should be singular 'relationship' to agree with 'any' which is used with singular countable nouns here.

× I think that's the most important things about arguing.

✓ I think that's the most important thing about arguing.

The word 'things' should be singular 'thing' because 'the most important' refers to a singular noun.