Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like chatting with friends?
受験者
Yes, I like chatting with my friends whenever I have free times or a chance because it makes me feel more connected and relaxed.
試験官
What do you usually chat about with friends?
受験者
Usually, we would talk about our daily lives and the special events have been in our lives as well. Besides, we also talked about our companies and jobs.
試験官
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
受験者
I prefer talking with only one person, as if there is a group of people, it is more ideal to talk with them in person. Therefore, I like talking with one person only at a time.
試験官
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
受験者
Of course, to be honest, I prefer talking in person because face to face communication help us be better express our feelings or ideas without misunderstanding anything.
試験官
Do you argue with friends?
受験者
Like other people, we always have arguments and, uh, uh, whenever some other disagree with, uh, the, the, the other person, uh, we have arguments and at that time we just raise our tones of the voices.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like chatting with friends?
スコア: 75.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ như 'free times' nên là 'free time'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn hơn để tránh dài dòng.
例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends whenever I have free time because it helps me feel connected and relaxed.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
スコア: 70.0提案: Bạn nên sử dụng thì đồng nhất và câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn. Ví dụ, 'have been in our lives' không chính xác, nên dùng 'that happen in our lives'. Ngoài ra, dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.
例: Usually, we talk about our daily lives and special events that happen in our lives. Besides, we also discuss our companies and jobs.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
スコア: 80.0提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá rõ ràng nhưng có thể dùng từ ngữ tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Bạn cũng nên dùng liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.
例: I prefer talking with only one person because when there is a group, it's better to talk with them face-to-face. So, I like one-on-one conversations.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
スコア: 75.0提案: Bạn cần chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ 'help us be better express' nên là 'helps us express better'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn.
例: I prefer talking in person because face-to-face communication helps us express our feelings and ideas clearly, avoiding misunderstandings.
Do you argue with friends?
スコア: 60.0提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng tiếng lắp bắp và từ ngữ không cần thiết. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và ngắn gọn hơn. Hãy luyện tập nói trôi chảy và dùng từ phù hợp.
例: Like most people, we sometimes argue when we disagree, and our voices can get louder during those moments.
文法
× I like chatting with my friends whenever I have free times or a chance because it makes me feel more connected and relaxed.
✓ I like chatting with my friends whenever I have free time or a chance because it makes me feel more connected and relaxed.
The word 'time' is an uncountable noun when referring to free time, so it should not be pluralized as 'times'. Use 'free time' instead of 'free times'. This is a singular and plural issue.
× Usually, we would talk about our daily lives and the special events have been in our lives as well.
✓ Usually, we talk about our daily lives and the special events that have been in our lives as well.
The sentence mixes tenses and lacks a relative pronoun. 'Would talk' suggests conditional or habitual past, but the question is about usual present activity, so 'talk' is correct. Also, 'the special events have been in our lives' needs 'that' to connect the clause properly. This is a present tense issue and sentence structure issue.
× Besides, we also talked about our companies and jobs.
✓ Besides, we also talk about our companies and jobs.
The question asks about usual chatting topics, so present tense 'talk' is appropriate instead of past tense 'talked'. This is a past tense issue.
× I prefer talking with only one person, as if there is a group of people, it is more ideal to talk with them in person.
✓ I prefer talking with only one person, as if there is a group of people, it is more ideal to talk with them in person.
No correction needed here as 'talking' is correctly used after 'prefer'.
× Therefore, I like talking with one person only at a time.
✓ Therefore, I like talking with one person only at a time.
No correction needed; 'talking' is correctly used after 'like'.
× face to face communication help us be better express our feelings or ideas without misunderstanding anything.
✓ Face-to-face communication helps us express our feelings or ideas better without misunderstanding anything.
'Communication' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' not 'help'. Also, 'be better express' is incorrect; it should be 'express ... better'. This is a singular and plural issue and verb form issue.
× Like other people, we always have arguments and, uh, uh, whenever some other disagree with, uh, the, the, the other person, uh, we have arguments and at that time we just raise our tones of the voices.
✓ Like other people, we always have arguments and, uh, whenever someone disagrees with the other person, we have arguments and at that time we just raise our voices.
'Some other' is incorrect; it should be 'someone' (singular). The verb 'disagree' should be 'disagrees' to agree with singular subject 'someone'. 'Tones of the voices' is awkward; 'voices' is sufficient. This is a singular and plural issue and subject-verb agreement issue.
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