Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中有较多的重复和填充词，影响流畅性。建议减少重复和语气词，使用更自然简洁的表达，同时增加具体细节使内容更丰富。

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because we often discuss interesting topics like movies, music, and gift ideas for our families.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，且内容重复。建议使用正确语法，避免重复，并且提供更具体的细节和理由。

例: We usually talk about movies and music, but sometimes we also discuss people we both dislike, which makes the conversation more engaging.

提案: 回答结构较好，但有语法错误和用词不当。建议注意语法准确性，使用恰当词汇，并保持句子简洁。

例: It depends on the situation. I prefer chatting with one close friend for meaningful conversations, but I enjoy group chats because they are lively and fun.

提案: 回答不完整且有语法错误，表达不清。建议完整表达观点，注意语法和句子完整性，避免使用填充词。

例: It depends on the situation. When I feel down, I prefer face-to-face communication to see facial expressions, but when I'm excited, I like chatting through social media.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达，注意语法，避免重复，并具体说明如何处理争论。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because I consider myself gentle. Usually, I talk things over calmly when disagreements arise.

× because we always talking about some interesting topics such as, uh, uh, such as the movies, the music or the, uh, or, or even the gift for our families, You, you name it.

✓ because we are always talking about some interesting topics such as the movies, the music, or even gifts for our families. You name it.

这里缺少助动词“are”，导致动词时态错误。现在进行时需要用“be动词+动词ing”形式。建议在“always”后加上“are”以构成正确的现在进行时。

× we're usually talking about the movies, the music or something interesting things.

✓ we usually talk about movies, music, or interesting things.

“usually”表示习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时。原句中“we're usually talking”时态不当，且“something interesting things”中“something”和“things”重复，需改为“interesting things”。

× what impressed we always, uh, talking about someone we both hate.

✓ what impresses us, we always talk about someone we both hate.

“impressed”是过去分词，句意应为“让我们印象深刻的是”，应使用一般现在时“impresses”，且主语和宾语顺序错误，应为“impresses us”。“talking”应改为一般现在时“talk”。

× I believe everyone will talking about this topic is very interesting.

✓ I believe everyone talking about this topic is very interesting.

“will talking”结构错误，助动词“will”后应接动词原形“talk”。但句意更自然的是省略“will”，用现在分词作主语补语。

× I prefer to chat with what person because it's easier to have the meaningful conversations.

✓ I prefer to chat with that person because it's easier to have meaningful conversations.

“what person”用法错误，应为指示代词“that person”。“the meaningful conversations”中“the”不必要，改为“meaningful conversations”。

× or even the gift for our families

✓ or even gifts for our families

“gift”应与“families”对应，使用复数形式“gifts”。

× I prefer to talking with others face to face because I can see the facial expressions on others face.

✓ I prefer to talk with others face to face because I can see the facial expressions on others' faces.

“prefer to”后应接动词原形“talk”，不是动名词“talking”。“others face”应为所有格“others' faces”。

× when I feel excited, I will talking with others through the.

✓ when I feel excited, I will talk with others through it.

“will”后应接动词原形“talk”，不是“talking”。句尾缺少宾语，补充“it”使句子完整。

× I am very gentle and kind people.

✓ I am a very gentle and kind person.

主语“I”是单数，谓语“am”后应接单数名词“person”，而非复数“people”。

× I will talking to talking with them, uh, when I feel calm downs.

✓ I will talk to them when I calm down.

“will”后应接动词原形“talk”，而非“talking”。“calm downs”错误，动词“calm down”应为不加s的原形或过去式，且此处用一般现在时“calm down”。