Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınızda tekrar eden ifadeler var ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları bulunmakta. Daha doğal ve akıcı bir cevap için cümlenizi sadeleştirip, dilbilgisi kurallarına dikkat etmelisiniz.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me stay updated about their lives and strengthens our bond.

提案: Cümleniz biraz karışık ve bazı kelime hataları var. Konuşmanızı daha net ve akıcı yapmak için cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve anlamlı yapmalısınız.

例: We usually talk about various topics like our exams, friendships, relationships, and sometimes we even have arguments about personal issues.

提案: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve anlam açısından hatalar var. Daha açık ve doğru ifadeler kullanarak düşüncelerinizi net bir şekilde ifade etmelisiniz.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend because group chats can be complicated and sometimes people judge each other, but one-on-one conversations feel more comfortable and honest.

提案: Cümleniz genel olarak anlaşılır ancak bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime seçiminde iyileştirme yapılabilir. Daha akıcı ve doğru ifadeler kullanmalısınız.

例: I definitely prefer face-to-face communication because it conveys emotions better, whereas messages on social media can often be misunderstood.

提案: Cümleniz biraz karışık ve bazı dilbilgisi hataları var. Daha net ve düzgün cümleler kurarak kendinizi daha iyi ifade edebilirsiniz.

例: Sometimes we argue, but not often, because we care about each other. Like any relationship, we have occasional problems, but they never harm our friendship.

× Yes, I love to chat with my friends because I always chat with my friends and they always tells me what is happening on their own lives and I would gladly to chat with them.

✓ Yes, I love to chat with my friends because I always chat with my friends and they always tell me what is happening in their own lives and I would gladly chat with them.

The verb 'tell' should be in the base form 'tell' to agree with the plural subject 'they'. Also, 'would gladly to chat' is incorrect; 'would gladly chat' is correct because 'would' is followed by the base verb without 'to'. Additionally, 'on their own lives' should be 'in their own lives' for correct preposition usage.

× Yes, I love to chat with my friends because I always chat with my friends and they always tells me what is happening on their own lives and I would gladly to chat with them.

✓ Yes, I love to chat with my friends because I always chat with my friends and they always tell me what is happening in their own lives and I would gladly chat with them.

The correct preposition to use with 'lives' in this context is 'in' rather than 'on'. We say 'happening in their lives' to indicate events occurring within their life experiences.

× It always changes, but sometimes we argue about the things that happening in on our lives and sometimes it's just exams or sometimes it's the friendships and sometimes it's the relationship with our boyfriends or girlfriends.

✓ It always changes, but sometimes we argue about the things that are happening in our lives and sometimes it's just exams or sometimes it's friendships and sometimes it's the relationship with our boyfriends or girlfriends.

The phrase 'things that happening' is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the present continuous tense 'are happening'. Also, 'in on our lives' is incorrect; it should be 'in our lives'. Additionally, 'the friendships' should be 'friendships' without 'the' because it refers to friendships in general.

× It always changes, but sometimes we argue about the things that happening in on our lives and sometimes it's just exams or sometimes it's the friendships and sometimes it's the relationship with our boyfriends or girlfriends.

✓ It always changes, but sometimes we argue about the things that are happening in our lives and sometimes it's just exams or sometimes it's friendships and sometimes it's the relationship with our boyfriends or girlfriends.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'our lives'; the correct preposition is 'in' to indicate events occurring within our lives.

× It always changes, but sometimes we argue about the things that happening in on our lives and sometimes it's just exams or sometimes it's the friendships and sometimes it's the relationship with our boyfriends or girlfriends.

✓ It always changes, but sometimes we argue about the things that are happening in our lives and sometimes it's just exams or sometimes it's friendships and sometimes it's the relationship with our boyfriends or girlfriends.

The definite article 'the' before 'friendships' is unnecessary because it refers to friendships in general, not specific ones. Removing 'the' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I have experienced a lot of big group friendships but it never last long because they're always want someone that doesn't like you and it really changed the groups think.

✓ I have experienced a lot of big group friendships but they never last long because they always want someone that doesn't like you and it really changes the group's thinking.

The subject 'group friendships' is plural, so the verb should be 'last' in plural form 'last'. Also, 'they're always want' is incorrect; it should be 'they always want'. 'Groups think' should be 'group's thinking' to show possession and correct noun form.

× I have experienced a lot of big group friendships but it never last long because they're always want someone that doesn't like you and it really changed the groups think.

✓ I have experienced a lot of big group friendships but they never last long because they always want someone that doesn't like you and it really changes the group's thinking.

The verb 'changed' should be in present tense 'changes' to agree with the singular subject 'it' referring to the effect on the group's thinking. Also, 'they're always want' is incorrect; 'they always want' is correct.

× I have experienced a lot of big group friendships but it never last long because they're always want someone that doesn't like you and it really changed the groups think.

✓ I have experienced a lot of big group friendships but they never last long because they always want someone that doesn't like you and it really changes the group's thinking.

The pronoun 'it' is incorrectly used to refer to 'group friendships' which is plural; 'they' should be used instead. Also, 'groups think' should be 'group's thinking' to correctly show possession.

× But with only friend you can never talk about anything without any judging.

✓ But with only one friend you can never talk about anything without any judging.

The phrase 'with only friend' is missing the quantifier 'one' to indicate a single friend. Without 'one', the phrase is grammatically incorrect.

× I would definitely prefer to face to face chat because it really changed the emotional effect on the people I think.

✓ I would definitely prefer to chat face-to-face because I think it really changes the emotional effect on people.

The phrase 'to face to face chat' is incorrect; the correct form is 'chat face-to-face'. Also, 'changed' should be 'changes' to maintain present tense consistency. 'On the people' should be 'on people' as a general statement.

× I would definitely prefer to face to face chat because it really changed the emotional effect on the people I think.

✓ I would definitely prefer to chat face-to-face because I think it really changes the emotional effect on people.

The verb 'changed' should be in present tense 'changes' to match the present tense context of the sentence.

× But in the social media you just write something with no emotion and sometimes the other, the one friend can understand it very the wrong way.

✓ But on social media you just write something with no emotion and sometimes the other friend can understand it very wrongly.

The correct preposition is 'on social media' not 'in the social media'. Also, 'very the wrong way' is incorrect; 'very wrongly' or 'in the wrong way' is correct. 'The one friend' should be 'the other friend' or just 'another friend'.

× But in the social media you just write something with no emotion and sometimes the other, the one friend can understand it very the wrong way.

✓ But on social media you just write something with no emotion and sometimes the other friend can understand it very wrongly.

The phrase 'the other, the one friend' is redundant and confusing; 'the other friend' is sufficient and clearer.

× Actually, sometimes we do, but not very often because I like my friends a lot and they like me too.

✓ Actually, sometimes we do argue, but not very often because I like my friends a lot and they like me too.

The sentence 'sometimes we do' is incomplete; adding the verb 'argue' clarifies the meaning and completes the sentence.

× So sometimes when every relationship has some problems and we have to and we argue about those but we never, you know, got broken or affect us badly.

✓ So sometimes, when every relationship has some problems, we have to argue about those, but we never, you know, get broken or let it affect us badly.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. Adding 'argue' after 'have to' completes the thought. Also, 'got broken' should be 'get broken' to maintain present tense, and 'affect us badly' should be preceded by 'let it' to be grammatically correct.