Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer shows enthusiasm but lacks clarity and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your sentences clearer and more structured, avoid redundancy, and use correct verb tenses. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me feel understood, especially when I'm stressed. Talking to them is very relaxing and makes me feel supported. Whenever I have free time, I usually call or message them to catch up.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to organize your ideas better, use linking words like 'also' or 'moreover' correctly, and provide specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and focus on clear, concise sentences.

例: We usually talk about our daily routines and personal experiences. Also, since I am attending university, we often discuss educational topics related to our majors to help each other understand the subjects better.

提案: Your answer conveys your preference but has some awkward phrasing and grammatical errors. Try to use clearer sentence structures and correct word choices. Use linking words like 'because' and 'therefore' properly to connect your ideas.

例: I prefer chatting with a group of people rather than just one friend because discussing an issue with many people allows me to hear different opinions. Therefore, it helps me improve my knowledge.

提案: Your answer expresses your preference but is repetitive and unclear in parts. Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'I don't' repeated multiple times. Also, clarify your last sentence and use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I prefer communicating face-to-face because it feels more genuine and real compared to social media. In my opinion, face-to-face conversations allow better understanding and connection.

提案: Your answer shows your point but contains repetition and filler words. Try to speak more fluently and avoid repeating words. Also, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes because we often have different opinions. However, I always try to support my points with evidence to make the discussion constructive.

× Definitely, I do favor chatting with my friends because it made me feel realized, especially when I feel stressed.

✓ Definitely, I do favor chatting with my friends because it makes me feel relieved, especially when I feel stressed.

The original sentence incorrectly uses the past tense 'made' when referring to a general or habitual feeling. The present tense 'makes' is appropriate here because the feeling occurs regularly. Also, 'realized' is incorrect in this context; the correct word is 'relieved' to express feeling less stressed.

× And yeah talking to my friend is a we all.

✓ And yeah, talking to my friends is a way to relax.

The phrase 'talking to my friend is a we all' is grammatically incorrect and unclear. 'Friend' should be plural 'friends' to match the context, and 'we all' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'way to relax.' The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and corrects the singular/plural issue.

× And yeah whenever I have a free diet I always I take about me to my friends.

✓ And yeah, whenever I have free time, I always talk about myself to my friends.

The phrase 'free diet' is incorrect; it should be 'free time.' Also, 'I take about me to my friends' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'I talk about myself to my friends.' The prepositions and word choices were incorrect and have been corrected.

× Where is mostly about a while daily routines and experience from our life yeah moreover, we share about the knowledge and educational things because now I'm attending the university so we have to share and address the knowledge about that about the subject which writer to our majors and.

✓ We mostly talk about our daily routines and experiences from our lives. Moreover, we share knowledge and educational topics because now I'm attending university, so we have to share and discuss knowledge about subjects related to our majors.

The original sentence has multiple preposition errors and awkward phrasing. 'Where is mostly about a while daily routines' is incorrect; it should be 'We mostly talk about our daily routines.' 'Share about the knowledge' should be 'share knowledge.' 'Address the knowledge about that about the subject which writer to our majors' is unclear and corrected to 'discuss knowledge about subjects related to our majors.' These corrections improve clarity and correct preposition use.

× Actually I do prefer chatting or discussing with a group of people rather than only one friend because by discussing 1 issue for as more I can get various positive from those kind of people.

✓ Actually, I do prefer chatting or discussing with a group of people rather than only one friend because by discussing one issue with more people, I can get various positive perspectives from those kinds of people.

The phrase '1 issue for as more' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'one issue with more people.' Also, 'various positive' is incomplete; it should be 'various positive perspectives.' 'Those kind of people' should be pluralized to 'those kinds of people.' These corrections address singular/plural issues and improve clarity.

× Wait, I prefer communicating with face to face because I don't, I don't, I don't feel like uh, communicating on social media.

✓ Well, I prefer communicating face-to-face because I don't feel like communicating on social media.

The phrase 'communicating with face to face' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'communicating face-to-face.' Also, the repeated 'I don't' is unnecessary and removed for clarity.

× Definitely all that I actually, me and my friends, uh, don't agree mostly and yet we have to argue and we have to argue for for the point.

✓ Definitely, actually, my friends and I mostly don't agree, and yet we have to argue for our points.

The phrase 'me and my friends' is incorrect; the subject form 'my friends and I' should be used. Also, 'argue for for the point' is repetitive and should be 'argue for our points.' These corrections fix pronoun usage and redundancy.