Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases, such as 'It's also strengths our real.' To improve, focus on clear sentence construction and avoid incomplete or incorrect expressions. Also, try to keep your answer concise and natural within 5 sentences.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. For example, after a long day, talking about our experiences always lifts my mood. It also strengthens our friendship, making us feel closer.

提案: Your answer covers the topic well but has some filler words like 'uh' and minor grammatical errors such as 'helps us to helps us'. To improve, try to avoid fillers and ensure subject-verb agreement. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as school, work, or hobbies. We often share funny stories and discuss recent movies and music we enjoy. These conversations help us stay connected and relax after a busy day.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and starts abruptly with 'Friend.' To improve, begin with a clear topic sentence and complete your thoughts. Avoid sentence fragments and provide specific supporting details with proper linking words.

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for a more personal and meaningful conversation. When it's just the two of us, we can share thoughts openly without distractions, which helps deepen our connection. For example, I often have more honest and relaxed talks when I am alone with a close friend.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains repetition ('facial facial') and unclear phrases ('imported conversations'). To improve, avoid repetition and use clear, precise language. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction. I can read facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand the other person better, especially during important conversations.

提案: Your answer has grammatical errors such as 'options opinions' and 'this disagreements' and ends abruptly. To improve, correct these errors, complete your sentences, and use linking words to make your answer coherent and natural.

例: Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics. However, these disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better. For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often leads to interesting conversations rather than conflicts.

× It's also strengths our real.

✓ It also strengthens our relationship.

The word 'strengths' is a noun here but the sentence requires a verb form 'strengthens' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'our real' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'our relationship' to make sense in context.

× These conversations helps us to uh, helps us stay connected and relax after a busy day.

✓ These conversations help us to stay connected and relax after a busy day.

The subject 'conversations' is plural, so the verb should be 'help' instead of 'helps'. Also, the phrase 'helps us' is repeated unnecessarily; removing the repetition improves clarity.

× Friend. I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for a more personal and meaningful conversation.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend because it allows for a more personal and meaningful conversation.

The word 'Friend.' is a fragment and does not fit the sentence structure. Removing it corrects the sentence structure and makes it complete.

× For example, I often have a more honest and relaxed talks when I am.

✓ For example, I often have more honest and relaxed talks when I am with a friend.

The phrase 'a more honest and relaxed talks' is incorrect because 'talks' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'when I am.' Adding 'with a friend' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction when talking in person. Person I can read facial facial expressions and body language which helps me understand the other person better, for example during imported conversations face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it allows for more genuine and effective interaction when talking in person. I can read facial expressions and body language, which helps me understand the other person better, for example during important face-to-face conversations.

The word 'Person' is misplaced and should be removed. The repeated word 'facial' is an error and should appear once. 'Imported' is incorrect and should be 'important'. Also, 'face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective.

× Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different options opinions on important topics.

✓ Yes, I occasionally argue with friends, especially when we have different opinions on important topics.

The word 'options' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'opinions'. This is a vocabulary choice error related to pronoun usage context.

× However, this disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better for example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often leads to interesting conversation rather than.

✓ However, these disagreements are usually brief and help us understand each other better. For example, we might debate about movies or current events, which often leads to interesting conversations rather than conflicts.

The word 'this' should be 'these' to agree with the plural noun 'disagreements'. The sentence is incomplete and needs proper punctuation and completion for clarity. 'Conversation' should be plural 'conversations' to match the context.