Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ý chính rõ ràng, nhưng cần tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Hãy cố gắng rút ngắn câu trả lời trong 3-4 câu và tránh sử dụng từ thừa như "uh".

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and strengthen our relationships. Additionally, it allows us to share experiences and support each other.

提案: Bạn nên tránh nói về chủ đề tiêu cực như "talk bad things about people" vì nó không phù hợp và có thể gây ấn tượng xấu. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cụ thể hơn để mô tả chủ đề trò chuyện tích cực.

例: Usually, my friends and I talk about our hobbies, such as sports and music, or share interesting experiences from our daily lives.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên sử dụng từ nối để liên kết ý và tránh lặp lại cụm từ giống nhau. Ngoài ra, hãy làm rõ ý "controversial" vì có thể gây hiểu nhầm.

例: I prefer chatting with a group because it allows me to hear different opinions, which makes the conversation more interesting and engaging.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý chính nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác như "facial ex expression". Hãy chú ý phát âm và ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to observe people's emotions and facial expressions, which helps me respond appropriately.

提案: Câu trả lời có nội dung tốt nhưng câu hơi dài và có lỗi ngữ pháp như "or but also". Hãy chia câu thành các phần ngắn hơn và sử dụng từ nối chính xác để câu trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I do argue with my friends sometimes when we have different opinions. However, we always try to listen to each other and resolve conflicts positively.

× Moreover, I think uh chatting with friends is also a way to bond the relationship with our mates.

✓ Moreover, I think uh chatting with friends is also a way to bond relationships with our mates.

The word 'relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple connections with different mates, not just one. Using the plural form correctly matches the context of bonding with several friends.

× The most common topics I usually chat with my friends might be about our hobbies or interests.

✓ The most common topics I usually chat about with my friends might be about our hobbies or interests.

The verb 'chat' requires the preposition 'about' to indicate the subject of the conversation. Without 'about', the sentence is incomplete and grammatically incorrect.

× Sometimes even with my best friends, we prefer to talk bad things about people that we hate.

✓ Sometimes even with my best friends, we prefer to talk about bad things about people that we hate.

The verb 'talk' needs the preposition 'about' to specify the topic. Omitting 'about' causes a grammatical error in the sentence structure.

× It bring a lot of joy.

✓ It brings a lot of joy.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb must be in the third person singular form 'brings' to agree with the subject.

× I would say a group of people chatting with a group of people is a chance for us to listen to different ideas and it can make the conversation more controversial.

✓ I would say chatting with a group of people is a chance for us to listen to different ideas, and it can make the conversation more interesting.

The original sentence is repetitive and awkward. Removing the repeated phrase and correcting 'controversial' to 'interesting' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Besides that, it's a it's good to listen to other ideas.

✓ Besides that, it's good to listen to other ideas.

The phrase 'it's a it's' is redundant and incorrect. Removing the extra 'a' corrects the pronoun usage and improves sentence fluency.

× It's intriguing to see peoples emotions and facial ex expression to behave properly when we communicate.

✓ It's intriguing to see people's emotions and facial expressions to behave properly when we communicate.

The word 'peoples' should be the possessive form 'people's' to indicate emotions belonging to people. Also, 'facial ex expression' contains a typo and should be 'facial expressions'.

× It's intriguing to see peoples emotions and facial ex expression to behave properly when we communicate.

✓ It's intriguing to see people's emotions and facial expressions to behave properly when we communicate.

The noun 'expression' should be plural 'expressions' to match the plural 'emotions' and the context of multiple facial cues.

× Yes, of course, whenever we have conflicts about something or different ideas on a topic, we try to bring different opinions about it or but also strive to listen to each other so the arguments can be positive and all problem can be solved.

✓ Yes, of course, whenever we have conflicts about something or different ideas on a topic, we try to bring different opinions about it but also strive to listen to each other so the arguments can be positive and all problems can be solved.

The phrase 'or but also' is incorrect conjunction usage; 'but also' alone is appropriate here. Also, 'all problem' should be plural 'all problems' to agree with the context.