Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответ должен быть более структурированным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте лишних слов и старайтесь использовать полные предложения.

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because they are very kind and supportive. I often talk with my family as well, including my sister and brother.

提案: Ответ хороший, но можно добавить более разнообразную лексику и связующие слова для улучшения связности.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, including school, work, and hobbies. For instance, we often share updates about movies we've watched or places we'd like to visit, which helps us stay connected and understand each other better.

提案: Ответ содержит грамматические ошибки и неясности. Следует использовать полные предложения и объяснять причины предпочтения.

例: I prefer chatting with one friend rather than a group because groups can have different types of people, and sometimes it is hard to focus on one conversation.

提案: Ответ нужно сделать более связным и грамматически правильным, используя связующие слова для объяснения причин.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it is more honest and comfortable. People are less likely to lie, and it helps build better understanding.

提案: Ответ неясен и содержит ошибки. Следует прямо ответить на вопрос и объяснить, почему или почему нет, используя полные предложения.

例: I rarely argue with my friends because they are kind and happy people. We usually get along well and support each other.

× Well, it's an interesting question and I sometimes with my friends and my family or my sister and brother, I often chatting with my friends because my friends are very kind people.

✓ Well, it's an interesting question and I sometimes chat with my friends and my family or my sister and brother. I often chat with my friends because my friends are very kind people.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrectly used here; it should be the base form 'chat' after 'I often'. Also, 'I sometimes with my friends' is incomplete and needs the verb 'chat' to be grammatically correct. The correction uses the base verb form after 'I sometimes' and 'I often' to maintain proper verb usage.

× I don't prefer chaat with a group because in Group have many type of. Different people and bad people.

✓ I don't prefer to chat with a group because in a group there are many types of different people, including bad people.

The sentence has incorrect preposition usage and missing articles. 'In Group' should be 'in a group', and 'have many type of' should be 'there are many types of'. Also, 'chaat' is a typo and should be 'chat'. The correction fixes prepositions, articles, and adds missing verbs for clarity.

× I prefer chat with one people.

✓ I prefer to chat with one person.

'People' is plural, but 'one' indicates singular, so 'people' should be replaced with 'person' to match singular usage. Also, 'prefer chat' should be 'prefer to chat' to be grammatically correct.

× I prefer communicate face to face because where people communicate face to face and they don't say lies and they don't feel they're uncomfortable because I prefer that.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because when people communicate face to face, they don't lie and they don't feel uncomfortable. I prefer that.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to communicate'. The phrase 'where people communicate' is better as 'when people communicate' to indicate time. 'Say lies' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'lie'. 'Feel they're uncomfortable' should be 'feel uncomfortable'. The correction addresses these prepositional and phrase usage errors.

× As I argue with friends, because my friends are very kind and very happy people, I like they.

✓ I don't argue with my friends because they are very kind and happy people, and I like them.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and pronoun usage. 'As I argue with friends' is unclear and contradictory to the intended meaning. 'I like they' is incorrect; it should be 'I like them'. The correction restructures the sentence for clarity and correct pronoun use.