Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'I'm really enjoy' nên là 'I really enjoy'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời hơi dài và có phần không rõ ràng ở cuối câu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because they often give me helpful advice when I face problems. Also, talking with them helps me feel relaxed and happy, especially after a stressful year.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ. Hãy thêm chi tiết cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our homework and personal problems. For example, when I find an assignment difficult, I ask for their advice to understand it better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều từ thừa và lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I feels' nên là 'I feel'. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I prefer to chat with only one friend because it feels more private and comfortable, especially when discussing personal matters.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ thừa như 'uh' và hoàn thiện câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because it feels more private and comfortable. For example, when I talk in person, I can see my friend's expressions, which makes it easier to understand their feelings.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, khiến câu trả lời khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lỗi chính tả và diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, but not very often. Usually, we have different opinions about small things like which movie to watch. However, we quickly resolve our disagreements because we respect each other.

× Yes, I'm really enjoy chatting with friends because they often give me helpful advice when I face problems.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy chatting with friends because they often give me helpful advice when I face problems.

The verb 'enjoy' should be in its base form after the auxiliary verb 'am' only when forming the present continuous tense. Here, 'I'm really enjoy' is incorrect; it should be 'I really enjoy' because 'enjoy' is a main verb and not part of a continuous tense. The auxiliary 'am' is unnecessary here.

× especially after a stressful support year.

✓ especially after a stressful past year.

The word 'support' is incorrectly used here; it seems the intended meaning is 'past' to indicate the previous year. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar tense error, but correcting it clarifies the sentence meaning.

× Uh, I usually chat with my friends about our homework and personal problems. Uh, for example, when when often have you other understand diff difficult assessment or self advice When I face challenge and.

✓ Uh, I usually chat with my friends about our homework and personal problems. For example, when I face difficult assessments or challenges, I often seek advice from them.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words and unclear phrases. The correction restructures the sentence to be clear and grammatically correct, removing repetitions and clarifying meaning.

× It's only one friend. Uh, I prefer to, uh, test with only one friend because there is a private and, uh, I feels comfortable when I talk, uh, about personal, personal.

✓ It's only one friend. Uh, I prefer to chat with only one friend because it is private and I feel comfortable when I talk about personal matters.

'Test' is incorrect; it should be 'chat'. 'There is a private' is incorrect; it should be 'it is private' referring to the situation. 'I feels' should be 'I feel' to agree with the subject. Also, 'personal, personal' is repetitive and should be 'personal matters' or similar.

× I prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more private and comfortable. Uh for example, when I talk in person I can see my friend uh experience which makes it easier to understand their feelings sometime communicating through.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it feels more private and comfortable. For example, when I talk in person, I can see my friend's expressions, which makes it easier to understand their feelings compared to communicating through social media.

The phrase 'my friend uh experience' is unclear; it should be 'my friend's expressions'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and lacks comparison; adding 'compared to communicating through social media' completes the thought and corrects preposition use.

× Yes, I sometimes a girl with friends but not very often.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with friends but not very often.

The word 'a girl' is incorrect and seems to be a mishearing or typo for 'argue'. The verb 'argue' is correctly used here; the correction replaces the incorrect phrase with the correct verb.