Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“relieve myself”应为“relax myself”，“tired tiring day”重复且不自然，且“informations”应为不可数名词“information”。建议注意语法准确性和词汇的正确使用，同时回答应更简洁自然。

例: Yes, I like chatting with my friends because it helps me relax after a tiring day. Also, we often share useful information about study materials or discounts at restaurants.

提案: 回答内容丰富，但存在语法和词汇错误，如“famous peoples”应为“famous people”，“new open restaurant”表达不自然。建议使用更地道的表达，并注意名词的单复数和形容词的搭配。

例: We usually chat about various topics, such as celebrity gossip, delicious food at newly opened restaurants, and challenging math problems.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“only one friends”应为“only one friend”，“they will listen to me very”不完整且不自然。建议简化句子结构，表达更清晰。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend because I like a quiet environment. When there are many people, it can be noisy and I don't get a chance to speak, but with one friend, they listen carefully.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当，如“directors”应为“direct”或“directly”，且表达不够流畅。建议注意词汇的准确使用和句子连贯性。

例: I prefer to communicate face-to-face because you can read emotions from the speaker's facial expressions and gestures. It is more direct than words or sentences on social media.

提案: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，如“we will fire on a a movie”不合适，且句子结构混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子表达观点，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, sometimes we argue about movies because I like the story but my friend dislikes one of the actors. However, we value our friendship and respect each other's opinions.

× Yes, I like because it can relieve myself after a tired tiring day and when chatting with friends you can get some useful informations about studying materials or some discounts at restaurants.

✓ Yes, I like it because it can relieve me after a tiring day, and when chatting with friends, you can get some useful information about study materials or some discounts at restaurants.

这里“tired tiring day”中“tired”应改为“tiring”，因为“tiring”是现在分词，表示“令人疲劳的”；“relieve myself”错误，应该用“relieve me”，因为“relieve”后面接宾格代词；“informations”是不可数名词，应该用单数形式“information”；“studying materials”应改为“study materials”，因为“study”作形容词修饰“materials”。

× Yes, I like because it can relieve myself after a tired tiring day and when chatting with friends you can get some useful informations about studying materials or some discounts at restaurants.

✓ Yes, I like it because it can relieve me after a tiring day, and when chatting with friends, you can get some useful information about study materials or some discounts at restaurants.

“informations”是不可数名词，不能用复数形式，应改为“information”。

× We chat about almost everything, such as the gossip among famous peoples, the delicious foods in a new open restaurant, and the difficult mathematical problems.

✓ We chat about almost everything, such as the gossip among famous people, the delicious food in a newly opened restaurant, and the difficult mathematical problems.

“peoples”应为“people”，因为“people”是“人”的复数形式，不加s；“foods”通常用不可数名词“food”；“new open restaurant”应改为“newly opened restaurant”，形容词顺序和形式错误。

× I prefer to chat with only one friends because I like a quiet environment and if there are a lot of people that would be noisy and I can't find the room for me to say something only one friends, they will listen to me very.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because I like a quiet environment, and if there are a lot of people, it would be noisy and I can't find the room to say something. Only one friend will listen to me carefully.

“one friends”应为“one friend”，因为“one”后面接单数名词；句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整表达；“listen to me very”不完整，应改为“listen to me carefully”。

× I prefer to communicate face to face because you can read the uh, emotions from the speakers face and the gestures. It is more directors than words or sentence on a social media.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because you can read the emotions from the speaker's face and gestures. It is more direct than words or sentences on social media.

“speakers face”应为“speaker's face”，表示所有格；“directors”应为“direct”，形容词；“sentence”应为复数“sentences”；“on a social media”应为“on social media”，去掉冠词。

× Yes I do we will fire on a a movie because I like the stories but they hate one of the actors but we uh very treasure our friends friendship so she will respect me.

✓ Yes, I do. We will argue about a movie because I like the story but they hate one of the actors. But we treasure our friendship very much, so she will respect me.

“fire on a a movie”表达错误，应为“argue about a movie”；“stories”应为单数“story”，与上下文一致；“friends friendship”重复，应为“friendship”；句子结构混乱，需分句并调整。