Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp cũng như lặp từ (ví dụ: 'our our life'). Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời kết thúc câu một cách hoàn chỉnh để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially my best friend, because it helps me relax after a long week. We usually meet at a coffee shop and share stories about our lives and work, which gives me new perspectives.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu, tránh lỗi như 'this help me' thay vì 'this helps me'. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời bị bỏ dở ở cuối, bạn nên hoàn thành câu để câu trả lời trọn vẹn và mạch lạc hơn.

例: My friends and I usually talk about our lives, work, and challenges we face. For example, we share thoughts about problems at work, which helps me understand new perspectives and solve similar issues in the future. Besides learning, it's also a great way to relax.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp ('small growth' thay vì 'small group'). Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác để câu trả lời tự nhiên và dễ hiểu hơn.

例: I prefer chatting in a small group because it is lively and everyone can share their stories. In a one-on-one conversation, it might be less energetic, and in a large group, people may not listen carefully.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng câu cuối hơi thiếu mạch lạc và có lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời trôi chảy hơn.

例: I definitely prefer face-to-face conversations because they allow us to interact directly and understand each other better. Additionally, spending more time in person to talk about problems or just relax is more meaningful and effective.

提案: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác ('do agree' thay vì 'disagree', 'fairly' thay vì 'fair'). Bạn nên sửa lỗi ngữ pháp, dùng từ đúng và hoàn thành câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Sometimes I disagree with my friends or anyone I talk to, but only for a short time. Usually, we try to respect each other's opinions or avoid topics that might cause disagreement. I think keeping the conversation calm and fair is very important.

× Yes, I realized chatting with my friends, especially my best friend because it helped me relax after a long week.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends, especially my best friend, because it helps me relax after a long week.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'realized' which is past tense and does not fit the context of expressing a current preference. The verb should be in present tense 'like' to match the question about current habits. Also, 'helped' should be 'helps' to maintain present tense consistency.

× We often meet at the coffee shop where we share a story about our life, work or any concern about our our life and I find this conversation really helped me to have a new perspective and.

✓ We often meet at the coffee shop where we share stories about our lives, work, or any concerns, and I find these conversations really help me gain a new perspective.

The sentence has several issues: 'a story' should be plural 'stories' to match multiple topics; 'our life' should be plural 'our lives'; repeated 'our' is a typo; 'helped' should be 'help' to maintain present tense; the sentence ends abruptly and needs completion. The corrected sentence improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Normally my friends and I usually talk about our life, work or any challenges we uncover.

✓ Normally, my friends and I usually talk about our lives, work, or any challenges we encounter.

'Our life' should be plural 'our lives' to refer to multiple individuals. 'Uncover' is not the correct verb here; 'encounter' fits better when talking about challenges. Adding commas improves readability.

× For example, we often share about our thought about problem at work and this help me to understand a new perspective and can resolve a similar problem in the future.

✓ For example, we often share our thoughts about problems at work, and this helps me understand new perspectives and resolve similar problems in the future.

'Thought' should be plural 'thoughts'; 'problem' should be plural 'problems'; 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'this'; 'can resolve' is better as 'and resolve' for parallel structure.

× And besides learning that is also a great way to relax and.

✓ Besides learning, it is also a great way to relax.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'it is' clarifies the subject, and removing the trailing 'and' completes the thought.

× I prefer judging whether a small growth and is enough to have a fun conversation.

✓ I prefer judging whether a small group is enough to have a fun conversation.

'Growth' is a typo; it should be 'group'. The phrase 'and is' is incorrect and should be 'is'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.

× If there are not much people, they are might not uh listening carefully.

✓ If there are not many people, they might not be listening carefully.

'Much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'many' is correct for countable nouns like 'people'. 'They are might not uh listening' is incorrect; correct form is 'they might not be listening'.

× And if less people uh is lack of lively.

✓ And if there are fewer people, it lacks liveliness.

'Less' should be 'fewer' for countable nouns like 'people'. 'Is lack of lively' is incorrect; correct form is 'it lacks liveliness'.

× Also in a small group, everyone can share their story and discussion more.

✓ Also, in a small group, everyone can share their stories and have more discussion.

'Story' should be plural 'stories' to match 'everyone'. 'Discussion' needs a verb; adding 'have' clarifies the meaning.

× I definitely prefer face to face conversation because it allows us to interact directly and understand each other better.

✓ I definitely prefer face-to-face conversation because it allows us to interact directly and understand each other better.

'Face to face' should be hyphenated as 'face-to-face' when used as an adjective before a noun.

× Additionally, spend more time in person, talk about problem or just relax is more meaningful and effective.

✓ Additionally, spending more time in person, talking about problems, or just relaxing is more meaningful and effective.

The sentence lacks a subject and proper verb forms. Gerunds 'spending', 'talking', and 'relaxing' are needed to function as subjects of 'is'.

× Sometimes I do agree with my friends or any person who who I talk, but it's only for a short time.

✓ Sometimes I do disagree with my friends or anyone I talk to, but it's only for a short time.

'Agree' is incorrect in context; 'disagree' fits better. 'Any person who who I talk' is awkward; 'anyone I talk to' is correct.

× Usually we try to respect each other's opinions or avoid the topic might disagreement.

✓ Usually, we try to respect each other's opinions or avoid topics that might cause disagreement.

'The topic might disagreement' is incorrect; it should be 'topics that might cause disagreement' for clarity and correctness.

× I think keeping the conversation calm and fairly is very important when we have a new.

✓ I think keeping the conversation calm and fair is very important when we have a new one.

'Fairly' is an adverb; 'fair' is the correct adjective to describe 'conversation'. The sentence ends abruptly; adding 'one' completes it.