Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“funding experience”应为“fun experiences”或“interesting experiences”，且句子结构不够自然。建议简化表达，注意主谓一致，并使用更贴切的词汇。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends because we often share interesting experiences like school projects and recent movies. This helps us strengthen our relationship and feel closer.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“sometimes we always”矛盾且无意义。建议使用连贯的句子，避免重复，并且具体说明话题内容。

例: Usually, we talk about our schoolwork, like group projects and homework. Sometimes, we also share our favorite novels.

提案: 回答表达基本清晰，但存在语法错误，如缺少动词不定式to，且句子结构略显重复。建议注意语法准确性，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than a group because I am introverted. Speaking in public makes me anxious, but talking to one friend helps me feel relaxed and share ideas.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，如“face to face communication”应为“face-to-face communication”，句子结尾不完整。建议完整表达观点，注意句子完整性和语法正确。

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions, which is not possible when chatting through social media messages.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然，如“our less arguments”应为“fewer arguments”，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的表达方式，并补充完整句子。

例: I rarely argue with my friends because we usually share the same opinions. However, sometimes we disagree on small things, like choosing a restaurant to eat.

× we always share our funding experience such as the school works and recent films.

✓ we always share our funding experiences such as schoolwork and recent films.

“experience”应使用复数形式“experiences”，因为这里指多次的经历；“school works”应改为不可数名词“schoolwork”，表示学校作业。

× We can enhance our relationship by sharing our experience and makes our us feel closer.

✓ We can enhance our relationship by sharing our experience and make us feel closer.

“makes”应改为“make”，因为主语是复数“sharing our experience and”，动词应与主语一致；“our us”多余，应去掉“our”。

× Most of the time we discuss our school works, such as the group preparations and group homeworks.

✓ Most of the time we discuss our schoolwork, such as group preparations and group homework.

“school works”和“homeworks”均为不可数名词，应改为“schoolwork”和“homework”；“the group preparations”中的“the”可去掉。

× Sometimes we always, sometimes we share our favorite novels.

✓ Sometimes we always share, sometimes we share our favorite novels.

“Sometimes we always”语序不正确，应调整为“Sometimes we always share”，使句子完整且符合语法。

× I prefer chat with only one friend rather than chat with a group of people.

✓ I prefer chatting with only one friend rather than chatting with a group of people.

动词“prefer”后应接动名词形式“chatting”，而非动词原形。

× It may make me anxious to speak in the public, while chat with only one friend can make me feel relaxed and exchange our ideas.

✓ It may make me anxious to speak in public, while chatting with only one friend can make me feel relaxed and exchange our ideas.

“in the public”应改为“in public”，表示公开场合；“chat”应改为动名词“chatting”，与前文保持一致。

× I prefer to face to face communication because face to face can make me read the expressions while via social media I can only chat with messages which may lead to.

✓ I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows me to read expressions, while via social media I can only chat with messages, which may lead to misunderstandings.

“prefer to face to face communication”应改为“prefer face-to-face communication”；“face to face”作为形容词应连字符连接；句子不完整，补充“which may lead to misunderstandings”使句意完整。

× This makes our less arguments, but in some special circumstances, such as which restaurant to go to eat.

✓ This results in fewer arguments, but in some special circumstances, such as deciding which restaurant to go to.

“less arguments”应改为“fewer arguments”，因为“arguments”是可数名词；句子后半部分不完整，补充“deciding”使句子完整。