Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and well-structured by starting with a clear topic sentence and then adding supporting details with linking words.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends on my mobile phone because it makes me happy. Usually, we talk about events, gossip, and sometimes our studies.

提案: Your answer is too long and confusing due to grammatical mistakes and lack of clear structure. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and be specific but concise. Avoid repeating words and focus on clarity.

例: I usually chat with my friends about my studies, such as asking about homework when I am on leave. Additionally, we discuss parties, including how to organize them, what clothes to wear, and what food to prepare.

提案: Your answer covers the main points but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and avoid repetition. Also, try to be more precise and natural in your expressions.

例: I prefer both group chats and one-on-one conversations. Group chats are useful because I get many suggestions, while chatting with my best friend allows me to discuss personal and special topics.

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and concisely, using linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid unnecessary repetition and unclear phrases.

例: I prefer both face-to-face communication and social media, but mostly I use social media because everyone is busy. It is convenient for chatting about studies, occasions, and other matters.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use more natural expressions and organize your ideas clearly with linking words. Also, avoid vague phrases and be more specific.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends when their suggestions don't suit me or when there are misunderstandings. However, these arguments are normal in friendships and usually get resolved quickly.

× Usually we are talking about any kind of the event gossips as well As for studies.

✓ Usually we talk about any kind of event gossip as well as studies.

The phrase 'talking about any kind of the event gossips as well As for studies' is incorrect due to improper preposition use and article usage. 'Talking about' is correct but 'any kind of the event gossips' should be 'any kind of event gossip' without 'the' and 'gossip' is uncountable. Also, 'as well As for studies' should be 'as well as studies' with lowercase 'as' and no 'for'. The sentence is corrected to use proper prepositions and articles.

× Usually I chat about with my friends to related my studies like whenever I am on leave then I ask to my friends the about my homework and sometimes when we whenever we had have any kind of the party then we also talk about that kind of the party like how to organize what kind of the clothes will wear and how what we will eat and what kind of the party would be where is the location.

✓ Usually I chat with my friends related to my studies. Whenever I am on leave, I ask my friends about my homework. Sometimes, when we have any kind of party, we also talk about that party, like how to organize it, what kind of clothes to wear, what we will eat, and where the party will be located.

The original sentence has multiple incorrect prepositions such as 'chat about with', 'ask to my friends the about', and 'had have'. Also, 'related my studies' should be 'related to my studies'. The sentence is corrected by removing unnecessary prepositions and restructuring for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× If I talk about the group chat then I will get so many suggestion from my friends as well as if I talk about 1 friend this kind of the chats would be some personally things and I will talk about only special things with my only one friend she she would be my best friend.

✓ If I talk about the group chat, then I will get so many suggestions from my friends. As for one friend, these kinds of chats would be about some personal things, and I will talk only about special things with my one friend; she would be my best friend.

The word 'suggestion' should be plural 'suggestions' because it refers to multiple suggestions. Also, 'personally things' is incorrect; it should be 'personal things'. 'This kind of the chats' is corrected to 'these kinds of chats' to match plural form. These corrections address singular/plural agreement issues.

× If I talk about 1 friend this kind of the chats would be some personally things and I will talk about only special things with my only one friend she she would be my best friend.

✓ If I talk about one friend, these kinds of chats would be about some personal things, and I will talk only about special things with my one friend; she would be my best friend.

The phrase 'she she would be my best friend' contains a repetition error. Also, 'would be' is correct for third person singular here. The correction removes the repeated 'she' and clarifies the sentence structure.

× I prefer both but most of the time I use social media for doing chat because now everyone have their busy schedule so that's why most of the people and most of the friends are using chat by social media.

✓ I prefer both, but most of the time I use social media for chatting because now everyone has a busy schedule. That's why most people and most friends use chat on social media.

The phrase 'use social media for doing chat' is incorrect; it should be 'use social media for chatting'. Also, 'have their busy schedule' should be 'has a busy schedule' for subject-verb agreement. 'Using chat by social media' is corrected to 'use chat on social media' to use the correct preposition.

× And I also prefer social media for doing any kind of the chat as well as to communicate about the studies and any kind of the occasion and eaves.

✓ I also prefer social media for any kind of chat as well as to communicate about studies and any kind of occasion and events.

The phrase 'for doing any kind of the chat' is incorrect; it should be 'for any kind of chat'. 'Communicate about the studies' should be 'communicate about studies' without 'the'. 'Any kind of the occasion and eaves' is incorrect; 'eaves' is likely a typo for 'events'. The sentence is corrected for proper preposition and article use.

× Sometimes I argue with my friends when their suggestion is not suitable for me, as well as when they are wrong with others as well as sometimes they wrong with me.

✓ Sometimes I argue with my friends when their suggestions are not suitable for me, as well as when they are wrong about others or sometimes when they are wrong with me.

The phrase 'they wrong with me' is incorrect; it should be 'they are wrong with me' or 'they are wrong about me'. The modal verb 'are' is missing. Also, 'suggestion' should be plural 'suggestions' to match the context. The correction adds the necessary modal verb and plural form.

× Then I argue with my friends like you are not OK or I am not OK.

✓ Then I argue with my friends, saying things like 'You are not OK' or 'I am not OK'.

The phrase 'like you are not OK or I am not OK' is unclear and lacks proper structure. Adding 'saying things like' clarifies the meaning. Also, quotation marks are added to indicate direct speech. This improves sentence clarity and structure.