Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，且有重复和语义不清的问题。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意冠词和单复数的正确使用。

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. Since I'm in my final year of high school, I often feel stressed. Talking with friends helps me relax and stay positive about the future.

提案: 回答内容不够具体且表达混乱，存在语法错误和词汇使用不当。建议明确主题，使用恰当的词汇，并用连接词使句子连贯。

例: Like other teenagers, we usually talk about games, cars like Formula One, and sometimes share funny stories to make our conversations lively and strengthen our friendship.

提案: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议使用简单明了的句子，正确使用冠词和介词，并清楚表达个人偏好。

例: I like chatting with both groups and individuals, but I prefer talking one-on-one. I am more reserved, but that doesn't mean I'm an introvert. I just feel more comfortable sharing with one person at a time.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议使用完整句子，避免重复和口语填充词，清晰表达观点。

例: I used to prefer face-to-face communication, but now I prefer social media. With advances in technology, social media helps me stay informed about the world more easily.

提案: 表达不够流畅，语法和词汇使用不当。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词。

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends, but not often. As a Chinese, I value peace, but if something is unfair or wrong, I believe it's important to speak up, even with close friends.

× It is in a super deep pressure.

✓ I am under a lot of pressure.

这里的表达不正确，pressure是不可数名词，不能用a super deep pressure。应该用短语under a lot of pressure表示处于很大压力之下。

× So chatting with friend can ease my pressure, which can help me embrace a bright future.

✓ So chatting with friends can ease my pressure, which can help me embrace a bright future.

friend应使用复数friends，因为这里指的是和多个朋友聊天。

× just likes other teenager.

✓ just like other teenagers.

likes是动词第三人称单数形式，主语是I，应该用like。teenager应使用复数形式teenagers。

× We often chat with some, uh, beautiful woman and games and the cars, uh, just like Formula One, uh, we can talk about our anecdote to activate the atmosphere, which can dip our connection and bond.

✓ We often chat with some, uh, beautiful women and about games and cars, uh, just like Formula One, uh, we can talk about our anecdotes to activate the atmosphere, which can deepen our connection and bond.

woman应使用复数women。anecdote应使用复数anecdotes。cars前面不需要冠词the。dip用词错误，应为deepen。

× Actually I love both but I prefer chat with only one friend from other people.

✓ Actually I love both but I prefer to chat with only one friend rather than others.

prefer后面应接不定式to chat。from other people表达不准确，改为rather than others更合适。

× I just like to 1 by 1 and doesn't want to share to too many people for the one I can.

✓ I just like one by one and don't want to share with too many people if I can.

doesn't与主语I不一致，应为don't。1 by 1应写为one by one。share后面应接介词with。

× Actually, I used to community face to face, but now I prefer to communicate via social media.

✓ Actually, I used to communicate face to face, but now I prefer to communicate via social media.

used to后面应接动词原形communicate，而不是community。

× You know, with the development of artificial intelligence and high tech, uh, our social medium is growth, uh huger and huger, uh, via social media can help me better know everything about the world and.

✓ You know, with the development of artificial intelligence and high tech, uh, our social media is growing bigger and bigger, uh, via social media can help me better understand everything about the world.

social medium应为social media。is growth应为is growing。huger不是正确的比较级，改为bigger。better know应为better understand。

× Yes, but not often. You know as a Chinese we advocate peace but if there is something illegal and other unbalanced things we need to argue even with the best friends it just our duty and our prioritize prioritizing.

✓ Yes, but not often. You know, as Chinese, we advocate peace, but if there is something illegal or other unfair things, we need to argue even with our best friends; it is just our duty and our priority.

缺少逗号和连词使句子不通顺。prioritize prioritizing用词错误，应为priority。illegal和unbalanced搭配不当，改为illegal or other unfair things更合适。