Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to give a more complete and natural answer by directly responding to the question first, then adding a reason. Avoid awkward phrasing like 'mutual interest thing'. Use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer in 2-3 sentences.

例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially those who share similar interests with me. It makes our conversations more engaging and enjoyable.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Provide specific details about the topics you discuss.

例: We usually chat about movies and novels because I love watching films, and one of my friends shares the same interest. This topic often leads to interesting discussions between us.

提案: Try to organize your answer more clearly by stating your preference first, then explaining why. Avoid filler words like 'umm' and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: I enjoy chatting with both groups and one friend. However, I prefer groups because I can easily blend in, but with close friends, I prefer one-on-one conversations to feel more connected.

提案: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb forms and sentence structure. Explain your preference clearly and provide reasons with linking words.

例: I prefer communicating via social media, such as Line or Messenger, because it allows me to think before I respond, making the conversation more productive.

提案: Make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Express your opinion directly and explain your reason with specific details.

例: I don't like arguing with friends or anyone because I prefer to avoid conflicts. I believe listening more helps solve problems better.

× I only like chatting with friends who have a mutual interest thing with me.

✓ I only like chatting with friends who have mutual interests with me.

The phrase 'mutual interest thing' is incorrect because 'thing' is unnecessary and 'interest' should be plural to match the context. Use 'mutual interests' to correctly express shared interests between friends.

× As in earlier they said I share a lot of the interest things with friends.

✓ As I said earlier, I share a lot of interests with friends.

The phrase 'interest things' is incorrect; 'interests' is the correct plural noun. Also, the sentence structure is awkward; 'As I said earlier' is the proper introductory phrase.

× So mostly we will we will talk about movies and novel because I really love watching movies and also one of my friends really love watching movies so too.

✓ So mostly we talk about movies and novels because I really love watching movies and one of my friends really loves watching movies too.

The word 'novel' should be plural 'novels' to match 'movies'. Also, 'will we will' is redundant and should be simplified to 'we talk'. 'Love' should be 'loves' to agree with singular subject 'one of my friends'. The phrase 'so too' is awkward; 'too' at the end is sufficient.

× So this topic is kind of.

✓ So this topic is kind of interesting.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a complement after 'kind of'. Adding an adjective like 'interesting' completes the thought.

× I enjoy both UMM if the group of people I didn't feel umm either.

✓ I enjoy both. Umm, if it's a group of people, I don't feel umm either.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Didn't' should be 'don't' to match present tense. Adding 'it's' clarifies the subject. The sentence is split for clarity.

× People I didn't feel close much so I would prefer a group of people because I can blend in easily.

✓ With people I don't feel very close, so I would prefer a group of people because I can blend in easily.

The original sentence lacks prepositions and correct verb tense. 'Didn't' should be 'don't' for present tense. Adding 'with' clarifies the relationship. 'Close much' is incorrect; 'very close' is appropriate.

× But umm with the one that I feel close and connected so much I would like prefer A1 friend.

✓ But umm with the one that I feel very close and connected to, I would prefer one friend.

The phrase 'like prefer' is incorrect; use 'would prefer'. 'A1 friend' is unclear; 'one friend' is appropriate. 'Feel close and connected so much' should be 'feel very close and connected to' for correct expression.

× Actually I prefer in a social media as in lie or messenger or anything that I can text because I can thinks before I chat and I think it's make the conversation is productive.

✓ Actually, I prefer social media like Line or Messenger or anything that I can text on because I can think before I chat and I think it makes the conversation productive.

'Prefer in a social media' is incorrect; it should be 'prefer social media'. 'Lie' is a typo for 'Line'. 'Can thinks' should be 'can think'. 'It's make' should be 'it makes'. Added 'on' after 'text' for correct preposition usage.

× I am the one who don't like argue with friends or anyone because of the person that try to avoid the when problem issue or when problem occurs and I think it's the best way to listen more.

✓ I am the one who doesn't like to argue with friends or anyone because I try to avoid problems when they occur, and I think it's the best way to listen more.

'Don't like argue' should be 'doesn't like to argue' for correct subject-verb agreement and infinitive usage. 'Because of the person that try' is incorrect; it should be 'because I try'. 'Avoid the when problem issue' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'avoid problems when they occur'.