Chatting— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và câu có cấu trúc đúng để thể hiện ý một cách tự nhiên hơn.

例: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and feel comfortable. We often talk about our daily activities and share interesting stories.

提案: Bạn cần trả lời rõ ràng hơn và tránh sử dụng từ sai nghĩa như "chewing" thay vì "chatting". Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng với câu chủ đề và các chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Hãy sử dụng các từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.

例: I usually chat with my friends about our daily lives, such as what happened during the day or plans for the weekend. For example, we often meet on weekends to relax and talk.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá dài dòng và lặp từ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy cố gắng sử dụng từ vựng đa dạng và chính xác hơn.

例: It depends on the situation. Sometimes I prefer chatting with a group because it's lively, but other times I like talking to one friend who makes me feel comfortable.

提案: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng các liên từ để kết nối ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như "enjoy to race". Đồng thời, hãy mở rộng câu trả lời với các chi tiết cụ thể hơn.

例: I prefer face-to-face communication because we can hear each other's tone and expressions. However, sometimes I use social media to send funny stickers, which makes chatting more enjoyable.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa chính xác. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cung cấp thêm chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý của bạn.

例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends about different things. However, these arguments help us understand each other better and make our friendship stronger.

× I really enjoy setting the tree with my friends and we often, uh, because it give me uh, convenience and I will feel more comfortable and angry.

✓ I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it gives me convenience and I feel more comfortable and happy.

The verb 'setting' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'chatting' to match the context. Also, 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. The phrase 'I will feel' should be 'I feel' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Angry' is likely a mistake; 'happy' fits better in this context.

× Uh, well, I usually, umm, chewing, I usually chew with fat with my friends about our daily life.

✓ Uh, well, I usually chat with my friends about our daily life.

The word 'chewing' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'chat' to describe talking. 'Chew with fat' is nonsensical here and should be removed.

× What happened is throughout our day or our week and for example, uh, in the weekend, we will sit in any more.

✓ We usually talk about what happened throughout our day or week. For example, on the weekend, we often sit together.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. It needs restructuring to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× My answer is my answer is it depend on because I, I don't care much about who, uh, about whether I I should talk about a group before or only one individual because, you know, I just wanna talk about who makes me comfortable.

✓ My answer depends on who makes me feel comfortable; I don't care much whether I talk to a group or just one person.

The sentence is repetitive and lacks clarity. It needs to be simplified and structured properly to express the idea clearly.

× Actually I enjoy to race because when I when I talk with my friend face to face we will have more audio language and when I talk via social media I will use sticker is very funny and it's depends.

✓ Actually, I enjoy face-to-face communication because when I talk with my friends in person, we use more spoken language. When I talk via social media, I use stickers, which are very funny, and it depends.

The phrase 'enjoy to race' is incorrect; it should be 'enjoy face-to-face communication'. 'Sticker is very funny' should be 'stickers, which are very funny'. Also, 'it's depends' should be 'it depends'. Prepositions and article usage are corrected for clarity.

× Argument is something not be denied in our lives.

✓ Arguments are something that cannot be denied in our lives.

The modal verb 'cannot' is needed to express impossibility. Also, 'Argument' should be plural 'Arguments' to match the context.

× So I used to use with my friends about many things my problems but it just helps my friendship more better I think that.

✓ So I used to argue with my friends about many things and my problems, but it just helps improve my friendship, I think.

The phrase 'used to use with' is incorrect; it should be 'used to argue with'. 'More better' is incorrect; 'better' alone suffices. Prepositions and sentence structure are corrected for clarity.